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Ya some people math just werenโt matching ig
I feel like this story has a lot of potential but I personally feel that your bias against some characters I feel like if you wrote with someone editing and making some corrections it might actually be really good let me know if you want some help Iโ m not the best but we could try.(I know this is a run on sentence๐)
Loving the way the story is flowing right now so keep it up my hope is that you donโt try to make this story edgy like with an evil super boy so if could keep like the tv show and make not super dark but not all sunshine but other then that keep up what youโre doing my guy and pls dont drop the story๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ
Man Iโm loving almost everything about this novel bro it had great plot cool characters the only bad this and it nit the worst but find an app or wensite that can edit your spelling and stuff like that cause other then that youโre AMAZING and plz dont dropp cause i will legit cry man๐ ๐๐๐๐๐พ๐๐พ
As a part of the male population Iโve never in my life been so scared a grouo of fangirls๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
Your story is doing great so far man dont listen to the haters