Honestly, xuxu rusheng’s journey was a little dragging. I wish there was more screen time for su yue and ming ansheng. also sad about su yan’s story. I resonate with him a lot so i was excited when his point of view came up. But it suddenly cut off :(( love the story overall!!

There were grammatical errors but not too bad. I absolutely love the story. If i’m being honest, su yue and ming ansheng were my favorite hehe I wish their story was expounded on more. Quite sad about the ending. Seemed a little rushed.