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Bad word building a lot of things go unexplained like what is the skill tree they are talking about some time he gets random skills from it and other time he just find the best skill in random places, they don’t explain if he only has it or does everyone else have it because it seem like it is just him and the power scaling is terrible
On 127 a lot of useless information is given like stat, abilitiess and other things that are not important to the story because they are never used. Battles are just text with saying they died or it is going to be a hard fight then go to the end. No really writing skills just a very basic story with a lot of rubbish information just to make the word count bigger.
Because you can’t fight anymore when you get a broken bone
There is no world building There is almost no character Devlopment if you are rich in this world and not part of the mc group You Bully the weak and fear the strong. i dont understand why they have not kick the mom out i was on chapter 190 and the two daughters said kick her out but the mc said keep her. he called her rude attitude quirky Overall it is a bad read
So just started the book it might get better later on but the start is not great from world building to character Design Most of the things are not strong the mc character Acts weird he time travel after suffering So much but when he see his school bully He is still scared a little, i cant not understand Why he thinks like a kid some time and They dont explain Much of what happened to him before He traveled back in time
The book is a good read but there is some problems characters feel empty the main character Acts like the world around him is less important than him making the world feel empty they talk about other cities but the world doesn’t feel big I’m on chapter 200 I stop reading it not because but because the Story developed way too slowly I’m on chapter 200 and it only has four dishes the story has no action whatsoever it is a very peaceful book so if you like that go read it
The writing quality is very good there’s nothing bad I can say about it the problem is that the story develops to slowly if there even is one the main character is going back and visiting all his old companions but because they’re in the story for so short it’s hard to get to know them or even there story it is a good read if you have a lot of time but if you want action or something with more substance you can skip this one I’m on 50 And I will drop this book but all in all it is a good read