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Thomas1231

Thomas1231

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learning chinese

2018-01-27 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • Thomas1231
    Thomas12319mth
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    The are still in the 4 simulation after 400 chapters the author forgot about the main story

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    I Have Awakened The Deduction System
    Eastern · Another Chance At Being Human
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    Thomas123111mth
    Posted

    I am convinced that this site is pushing this novel this is the second review I just got to chapter 1000 that is when he gets to second order the story is so rambling so much nonsense that can be skipped or said in a couple word become 5 or 6 chapters

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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Thomas1231
    Thomas123111mth
    Posted

    I am on chapter 725 the story is soooo slow I just want to know when he gets to second order

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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Thomas1231
    Thomas12311yr
    Posted

    Bad word building a lot of things go unexplained like what is the skill tree they are talking about some time he gets random skills from it and other time he just find the best skill in random places, they don’t explain if he only has it or does everyone else have it because it seem like it is just him and the power scaling is terrible

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    Online Game: You Call Him A Newbie?
    Games · I'm Nine Barrel
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  • Thomas1231
    Thomas12311yr
    Posted

    There is no world building, no character development. The title does not fit the story, no one has there own personality, just plain janes. No build up to action just bang and if anything get to hard here is the system to power up the mc. All in all just boring

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    I've Activated The Hidden Path of Beast Evolution
    Urban · Pikachu
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  • Thomas1231
    Thomas12311yr
    Posted

    On 127 a lot of useless information is given like stat, abilitiess and other things that are not important to the story because they are never used. Battles are just text with saying they died or it is going to be a hard fight then go to the end. No really writing skills just a very basic story with a lot of rubbish information just to make the word count bigger.

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    Global Lord: 100% Drop Rate
    Games · A Green Bird
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  • Thomas1231
    Thomas12311yr
    Replied to Patrat

    Because you can’t fight anymore when you get a broken bone

    This kind of insanity was why he had chosen Shang!
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Thomas1231
    Thomas12311yr
    Replied to Daoist_Rav

    Does it go back to normal

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    Apocalypse Of All Races
    Urban · Eagle Eats Chicks
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  • Thomas1231
    Thomas12311yr
    Posted

    I am on chapter 600 and I am dropping this because the speed of the story is tooo slow and to many unnecessary chapters. The story is ok but too many time has the author over explain the female body and other then the main character the other male character have lack of story or development

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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Thomas1231
    Thomas12312yr
    Posted

    There is no world building There is almost no character Devlopment if you are rich in this world and not part of the mc group You Bully the weak and fear the strong. i dont understand why they have not kick the mom out i was on chapter 190 and the two daughters said kick her out but the mc said keep her. he called her rude attitude quirky Overall it is a bad read

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    The Formidable Son-In-Law: The Charismatic Lucas Gray
    Urban · Mu Jiuzhou
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  • Thomas1231
    Thomas12312yr
    Posted

    So just started the book it might get better later on but the start is not great from world building to character Design Most of the things are not strong the mc character Acts weird he time travel after suffering So much but when he see his school bully He is still scared a little, i cant not understand Why he thinks like a kid some time and They dont explain Much of what happened to him before He traveled back in time

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    My Faᵵe System
    Fantasy · MellowGuy
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  • Thomas1231
    Thomas12312yr
    Posted

    Translation Does not make sense Sometimes And the story is terrible, to many mistake and the mc should be invincible with his stats but they make him out to be like everyone else

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    Doomsday: I Obtained A Fallen Angel Pet At The Start Of The Game
    Fantasy · Daniannnn
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  • Thomas1231
    Thomas12312yr
    Posted

    The book is a good read but there is some problems characters feel empty the main character Acts like the world around him is less important than him making the world feel empty they talk about other cities but the world doesn’t feel big I’m on chapter 200 I stop reading it not because but because the Story developed way too slowly I’m on chapter 200 and it only has four dishes the story has no action whatsoever it is a very peaceful book so if you like that go read it

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    A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World
    Fantasy · Whispering Jianghu
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  • Thomas1231
    Thomas12313yr
    Posted

    The writing quality is very good there’s nothing bad I can say about it the problem is that the story develops to slowly if there even is one the main character is going back and visiting all his old companions but because they’re in the story for so short it’s hard to get to know them or even there story it is a good read if you have a lot of time but if you want action or something with more substance you can skip this one I’m on 50 And I will drop this book but all in all it is a good read

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    90,000 Years of Longevity
    Action · Venerable_Linfeng
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  • Thomas1231
    Thomas12313yr
    Posted

    I’m on chapter 40 so far the plot has been bouncing to and fro it is hard to understand some chapters I’m basically lost I saw a comment saying to read up to chapter 50 I will try to get to 51 if still bad I will keep this review Up If I change my mind I will fix the review

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    Level Up Legacy
    Fantasy · MellowGuy
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