well thought out and great writing, but for the editor who looks to be pushing there agenda at the cost of this writers story. if love to see them write it too a end if they get a editor to fix when the last one destroyed .

so I get it. is this a thing now? all gender is fluid as the main whos male, is a she and her only when he's thinking. his senior sister is also a he and him in his thought too. also the write when describing anyone will call them correct as a him or her, but when talking the are switched??? did I miss something in this story and can someone explain how it is so badly gendered?

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seems he just stopped and gave the middle end part. phoned in the end again.

oh no. the legendary power they had the whole time comes out. why didn't they use it at start so the other teams equal couldn't one shoot them??? oh no they forgot they had them and use some commons right.......

is it me, or the 3 first family people and 2 2nd family that are on his team like half a second family no name? also how does second family weaker animals per you and equal animals not even equal if his friends have them? lastly how does that legend unicorn not seem to act like it at all but the first time shown. yes make the fight hard. but over kill easy when the teams are pretty much exact same class wise.....seems logic fell off table.

so somehow clans who they take days to reach at fastest speed in world. they all reach there townin seconds? they were unable to send out info on fact they have sedd to military??? oh and a armor that can stay out and is immune to all spells below forbidden is now limited and can't stop those spells?.....hello....issues...

so now heaven seeds are common??? 1 in a country to oh there 100 now..... leaders have high grade soul seeds too oh they all got heaven grade......wow

so I understand...the family i know who are vegetarian and have pimples for days are not doing it right then? I though skin care and proper cleaning keep a face that way??? did all vegetarian pimples vegetarian people i seen mess up????

seems he upgraded his seed to a soul seed with dust domain as the setup. so yes he upgraded.

so when dead guy uses the dark power the mark got stronger. when hero uses it it gets weaker............ can we please get continuity. if going to op him, op him, don't give it the need the f out of it against even your own set rules. ruins the storys flow.

so . he has 6 elements and more power then them all too use by 3 elements, yet they cast 50 adv spells or more and have power. he cast 20 of each and is done. seems the world has some power control issues.

this is a normal and set action of people from around there to any women not blood related. know a few who got step sisters in this mind set. none id call cute in anyway. bit there getting s wife's hard. most will do this for a option if fail elsewhere and then marry the stepsister whos nit blood related. it's one of the norms there. get over your way of life and remember that there is 100's of diffrnet life styles worse then this thats normal in there countries.

the story had me invested fast and hit me hard. well written too almost the end. I would of been happier with a horrible ending or freedom. still worth the read if can handle something so realistic it hits home.

great book, but like all book the pronouns for there sex is switched every time one sec its a he next sec she. if the protagonist a girl or guy? is his pets boys or girls. will he and panda girl/guy be both guys when they kiss but marry as a guy/girl? who knows as the books seem to have lost the sex of everything in there worlds.

so I guess this book doesn't know male/female or which nations name is what? seems that the book after chapter 2600 doesn't have a single person correcting it or editing anything. or maybe its hacked and pronoun is now it/them/that??? gj on editing it this way cant wait to finish the book and find out hes a her and then becomes a it/them/that.

was a great read from start to end. it was wrapped up fast and the twist was surprising. must read of like world cultivation with a great story that will both make you suprised and happy. Please enjoy this book.

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The story is a well thought idea. the drawing is great. The characters concepts are wonderful...... Sadly the man being a women and wen being a man part, this writer is failing at big time. There is a part where a dad comes after the computer geek with a kind heart. It starts with the noncultivator father man handling the women. Yet In this world the women even if never cultivated should be stronger. If the roles were reversed and the women was man handling the guy. No one would belive it. That said, the man should of been doing the way of using word play and threats to the ego. the way that should of played out is the dad using some past mistake of his daughter to make her bow her head and willing to let him slap her while demanding his money. Then seeing a chance at the money. He would then be throwing her wrong out and trying to for him to pay for her. There are many points this happens. Its a great idea and good story. Just needs to be alone the gender roles that they are now. otherwise its just him reincarnated into the same world just back in time. Just a thought of mine and why is gave a weak star rating to story development Also he wouldn't of been a drug gambler as that role is reversed. Instead he was doing it for a women who he hopes to be able to marry her and have her family's name as his isn't married anymore.