more chapter please

So Far i liked it you're doing great with tis story

I think someone from the Cullen would good but who is for you to choose, what would be easier or better for the story.

not a good translation, too Bad the story seem interesting

i like the story, i think if the chapter could be longer it would be perfect but like the author said it's is first story so it can only be better in the futur. sorry for my grammar i'm not english and my phone change my word with french word...