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Hiraeth 💕

2017-12-26 JoinedPhilippines
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  • Patolaaaaaaa7
    Patolaaaaaaa72yr
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    *channel it better. I swear so many authors use “channelize” and it’s starting to irritate me.

    He had never seen a wolf as powerful as Adrianna. This was the hidden side of the girl he was in love with. He had to protect himself from her so that he could train her power and help her channelize it better. 
    Feral Confessions - Adrianna And The Alpha
    Fantasy · MishaK
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  • Patolaaaaaaa7
    Patolaaaaaaa72yr
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    Wait, I thought she didn’t drink coffee?

    Ch 56 The Greater Cause?
    Feral Confessions - Adrianna And The Alpha
    Fantasy · MishaK
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  • Patolaaaaaaa7
    Patolaaaaaaa72yr
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    I believe the word is “channeling” not “channelizing” ☺️

    "Adri, don't use your energy now. Your internal organs won't be able to heal fast if you try channelizing your inner energy now. I'm going to get you a normal pain killer for humans," said her grandfather, fetching his medicine kit. He had cleaned and sanitized Adrianna's wounds carefully so that they wouldn't get infected, but there were still large gashes and a broken bone in her rib. She had fought bravely without complaining, and as usual, her father wasn't interested in even knowing of her whereabouts. Despite Kuro's disinterest, Ed had heard that he had hosted a grand feast to celebrate his victory.
    Feral Confessions - Adrianna And The Alpha
    Fantasy · MishaK
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  • Patolaaaaaaa7
    Patolaaaaaaa72yr
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    I think the book needs an editor and a proofreader. So much potential but needs a lot of improvement on grammar and sentence structures— not to mention the typos.

    Ch 3 Xavier
    The Reason I Burn For You
    Fantasy · QueenRani6
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  • Patolaaaaaaa7
    Patolaaaaaaa72yr
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    If she was a marden, then she isn’t a noble flower. Must be a lie tho.

    Ch 89 Royal Blood
    His Majesty's Devious Sins
    Fantasy · Xincerely
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  • Patolaaaaaaa7
    Patolaaaaaaa72yr
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    Okay then Asher is a Vampire and might be a Weakened one or a Half-Blood. The Half-Blood theory would make so much sense and would explain the hate he has for Vampires. If his father was a detestable Vampir then that would explain his hatred and self denial of who he really is.

    Ch 21 I'm Tired.
    His Majesty's Devious Sins
    Fantasy · Xincerely
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  • Patolaaaaaaa7
    Patolaaaaaaa72yr
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    Wait, i thought her thighs remembered what happened that night? Why is it saying otherwise????

    Her virtue remained. She ensured it. 
    His Majesty's Devious Sins
    Fantasy · Xincerely
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