CMShuk
Lv7
I subtitle Thai lakorns, and write fan fiction on the side.
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CMShuk11hCommentedIt’s Class 1, author. Please pay attention to your own storyline.
But Kendall, like a divine being descended from the heavens, had dispersed the fog around them and allowed them to overtake the long- standing leading Class 7 in just half a month.- CMShuk11hCommented
Huh? Shouldn’t this be Asher’s line, not Kendall? K is 1st place, while Ash is 49th. 🤦♀️
"Because I'm ranked 49th, while ranked you're 67th." - CMShuk12hCommented
This is the most ridiculous run-on chapter. It needs some serious grammatical corrections. - Conversations with quotation marks should be separated into their own paragraphs. - Paragraphs should separate different scenes and POV’s. This is a very good story so far, but an editor is needed to make it great.
"What?" Asher couldn't believe his ears.Mia took a deep breath. "My friends told me that you, the leader of Class 7, had an eccentric personality, and they asked if I could conquer you. I said I could, and then I tried.""Tried…?" Asher repeated with difficulty.She tried.He believed it.And now she was telling him that it was all just a joke admit that my intentions were wrong, but I was your girlfriend for a month!" Mia justified herself."You are just a mediocre student from Class 7. Did you have a top student as your girlfriend at one point?"Honor…?" Asher's mind buzzed.So he had Asher so low that even being deceived should be considered a gift from the deceiver?"Do you understand now? Mia never intended to confess her feelings to you for real!" Tristan looked annoyed.At this point, Asher had nothing more to say.His throat felt dry as he took out the necklace he had saved up for a month and stared at Mia. He let go of it, dropping it on the ground.It was his heart he hadn't had the chance to give.He turned away, his heart heavy with disappointment."Who gave you the confidence to think that Mia would like someone from Class 7?" Tristan pressed on, seeking to humiliate Asher further."Was it that new student in your class, Kendall? That scheming bitch who only knows how to secretly record videos?"Asher, who was about to leave, suddenly turned around and punched Tristan in the face, anger seething within him."How dare you talk about Goddess Kendall like that?"Kendall might be aloof and reserved, but she had never looked at them with disdain or disgust in her eyes.And Kendall almost saved him from the hooligans's bullying.He absolutely wouldn't allow anyone to speak about Kendall like this!"Asher, are you out of your mind?" Mia was dumbfounded.Asher didn't stand up for her against Tristan; instead, he defended Kendall. What did that mean?Was she, Mia, not even worth comparing to that village girl Kendall?Tristan touched the corner of his mouth and retaliated with a punch."Asher!" Students from Class 7 immediately rushed to beat up Tristan upon seeing Asher getting hit."Tristan!" Students from Class 1 saw their classmates being attacked and joined the brawl.Sharp-eyed students promptly reported the incident to the relevant teachers. Mr. Mathew was the first to arrive, and it took all his strength to separate Asher and Tristan. "Asher, what are you doing?"With the arrival of the teacher, the fight subsided, and both groups had bruises on their faces."He insulted Goddess Kendall!" Asher pointed at Tristan."Even in the face of a big issue, we must act reasonably. You are students, what's the difference between you and street thugs if you resort to fighting?" Mr. Mathew scolded loudly.The crowd nodded in agreement.See, that was why teachers were teachers. They were mature and composed."See, trash is just trash. No matter how much you teach them, it's pointless," Ms. Mary, the teacher in charge of Class 2, commented as she walked over.Smack! Mr. Mathew threw a punch, grabbing Ms. Mary by her collar in a fit of rage. "Who the hell gave you the right to call my students trash? They're not trash! They are living, breathing human beings! You can't humiliate them like this!"The crowd stood in stunned silence.Weren't they supposed to be reasonable and not resort to violence as educated students?"Mr. Mathew, let me go!" Many teachers hurriedly arrived and separated Mr. Mathew and Ms. Mary."Mr. Mathew! You are a man, how can you hit a woman!" Ms. Mary screamed, covering her eyes."Trash teachers teaching trash students, trash students studying in a trashed building – the perfect match! Perfect match!""Class 7 students are indeed all trash. I can step on the answer sheet with my foot and still get a higher score than them!" Tristan's expression was full of disdain."That's right!" Students of Class 1 echoed in agreement."Kendall isn't anything special," Mia launched a direct attack on Kendall. "She was just dragging everyone down in Class 2, and now she goes to Class 7 and becomes their 'Goddess Kendall.' It's ridiculous!" "That's enough!" Asher shouted.He had heard the word "trash" enough!"Didn't you say that stepping on the answer sheet would give you a higher score than us? Then let's compare our results in the monthly exam! If our scores are higher than yours, you, you, you, and all of you"Asher pointed his index finger successively at Ms. Mary, Tristan, Mia, and the Class 1 students who participated in the fight."You all must apologize to Class 7 and Goddess Kendall!"This was the only and most powerful counterattack!After saying that, Asher led the Class 7 students away.Once the fiercely spirited students returned to their classroom, they slumped down, their faces filled with frustration and a sense of powerlessness."Asher, I admit you looked cool when you were talking trash, but how are we going to beat those academic geniuses in the monthly exam?"Don't ask me, I have no idea. I was just acting on impulse!"Asher banged his head against the wall, wishing he could find a tofu to smash himself with."Uh–oh! Mr. Mathew is going to be fired!" a classmate rushed in from outside."Ms. Mary went to complain to the principal about Mr. Mathew, saying that he was violent towards women and unworthy of being a teacher.The principal noticed that our class's performance has declined since Mr. Mathew took over, so they said if our class's average score in this month's exam is still below passing, they will directly fire Mr. Mathew!"Everyone grew anxious."Ms. Mary has the nerve to say that Mr. Mathew is unworthy of being a teacher. Wasn't it she who went up and asked Goddess Kendall to apologize to Lisa and her child when Goddess Kendall was being slandered? She's the one who's unworthy of being a teacher!"How can we possibly pass? All of our textbooks are new except for the table of contents!"Physically assaulting someone is a stain on a teaching career. If he leaves Powell High School, will any other school hire him?"I remember Mr. Mathew's family was very poor. They even sold their sheep to scrape together the money for his journey to Powell High School. If he loses this job, then their family…"The bell for class rang. Mr. Mathew returned to Class 7 with a calm expression. Today's first period was language class."Turn to page thirty in your textbooks."He said calmly, picking up the chalk to write on the blackboard.However, his arm trembled uncontrollably.It was wrong of him to resort to violence.But he had reached his breaking point.Why should children who struggle academically be subjected to such humiliation?Some girls started crying, and a few boys also wiped their tears away."Is crying going to help? Instead of crying, use your time wisely to study and find a way to surpass Class 1!" Asher almost snapped his pen in frustration.He not only wanted to pass the exams, but he also wanted to defeat Class 1 and make them and Ms. Mary apologize to them!"It's useless. There are only 15 days left until the exams. Unless a miracle happens, you won't be able to beat class 1," Mr. Mathew said, lowering his arm and speaking in a calm tone.The gap between Class 7 and Class 1 was too vast.They were like clouds in the sky and mud on the ground – how could they compare?"Give me 15 days, and I'll make the miracle happen."Kendall appeared at the classroom door and said.If it weren't for Tristan insulting her, Asher wouldn't have taken action, and it wouldn't have led to the brawl between the two classes or Mr. Mathew striking Ms. Mary.Since this whole situation started because of her, she would resolve it herself.She could teach these students through the way the organization educated killers.It was a method different from the cramming approach of the school. - CMShuk3dCommentedSuch a man was worthy of her, Su Zhiyu.
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🤔 Or it could be a cuttlefish. They have tentacles too!
The 'owner' of this tentacle was either a squid or an octopus. - CMShuk3dCommented
The best boat is the USCG MLB (Motorized Life Boat), that can right itself even if it capsizes upside down! 🌊
The aircraft carrier was the most stable of all ship types. The first condition for crossing the storm area was that the ship had to be stable and not be overturned by the storm. - CMShuk5dCommented
🧐 I find it strange that nobody in the family ever questions this young girl’s vast wealth of knowledge and skills. Do they think: - She was struck by Divine Lightning during her head trauma? 🌩️ - She fell into the Well Of Smarts and absorbed it like a sponge?🧽 - She found a Library of Alexandria potion and poured it over her pancakes? 🥞 I’m obviously trying to be funny here, but I still think it’s strange, no matter how much a sis-con the family is. 🤷♀️
The excitement of the others cooled immediately upon hearing this, and their rationality slowly returned. They each took their seats, simultaneously looking towards Yang Mengchen, believing that since Jiujiu had said so, she must already have a strategy in mind. - CMShuk6dCommented
I think it would be better to design / build a leg brace so he can walk on his own. I would doubt the ground is smooth enough for the wheelchair.
Yang Chaowen nodded in agreement, "Whatever style Jiujiu likes, I will do my best to make it." - CMShuk6dCommented
🍆 😏 Hd to give up all those junior sisters, though.
Who would have thought being different could bring such good fortune? - CMShuk6dCommented
How wondrous if he’s that miserable? Because he sounds eager to jump into the fray…
That's right, Su Xing was a transmigrator who had crossed over to this wondrous world three years ago. - CMShuk8dCommented
If I could have a System that gives me $100 for every sarcastic remark I make, I could be a millionaire in about a month. 😜💴💷💶
In a good mood, Li Zhiyan relished the exciting scene of giving Aunt Gu a massage. Li Zhiyan found that he absolutely loved this kind of life where he didn't need to plan, a life that allowed him to perform miracles in front of others without having to think. Reborn, Li Zhiyan dreamt of a life that was easy-going, focusing primarily on being happy and cheerful. - CMShuk9dCommented
He’s made it to the legs! 🏁🏆
He began massaging Gu Wanzhou's thighs. - CMShuk9dCommented
You know she has to be enjoying this. I find shoulder / neck massages help with my migraines.
Meanwhile, Li Zhiyan started massaging around Gu Wanzhou's clavicle. - CMShuk10dCommented
You mean, when you were breast-feeding? 🍒 🤣🤣🤣
Li Zhiyan wanted to reminisce about his childhood. - CMShuk10dCommented
Substantial indeed. 🍒 😜
He was well aware of just how substantial Gu Wanzhou was. - CMShuk11dCommented
Err, going from older woman to older woman, satisfying their needs and rubbing their pains away???
With this skill now available, Li Zhiyan felt he really wouldn't be poor in the future, thinking that even if he specialized in giving massages to wealthy women, he could become rich. - CMShuk11dCommented
Her misunderstandings are popping up like daisies! 😂
As a child deprived of love, his heart must have been hurting, right? - CMShuk12dReplied to DaoistTranslator
😂 My Hyundai is red. 🚘 It drives me, my parents, my drums, everything!
At the start, he didn't have even a Tomson First Grade residence or a Lamborghini Veneno. - CMShuk12dCommented
What about your single-parent household, missy?! Do you look down on your mother who supplies all your YSL and LV frippery?
With his single-parent family background, she could never see herself with him in this lifetime.