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Arthrall1yrCommentedshould be tier 3
[Poison Snake Tail Dagger Tier 2]- Arthrall1yrReplied to LunasKnight
but I'm not done writing the book, just currently having darn issues with what to type for it. none of what I've written sounds good to me. . . haha
"Hmm. . . Normally I wouldn't allow you near there, but Sheppard said you were really good at leatherworking. So I'm going to give you a shot, the moment I think you are going to get sick you will be out of my store. Got it?" She asked me. - Arthrall1yrReplied to
which chapter was it? it has been awhile since I've written anything in this novel. I've had writer's block on it for awhile. currently got chapter 93 about halfway done sadly. . .
"Hmm. . . Normally I wouldn't allow you near there, but Sheppard said you were really good at leatherworking. So I'm going to give you a shot, the moment I think you are going to get sick you will be out of my store. Got it?" She asked me. - Arthrall1yrCommented
I would suggest changing the beginning sentence to, The XP was decent, but I noticed that it was slowing down. At the rate it was going
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it says April 1940 last chapter
Hector looked out of the window as the plane flew over France. Thankfully, it was still just February of 1940, and Germany was yet to invade it. - Arthrall2yrCommentedCh 502 502. Blood of the Dragon
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supposed to be number 2
Heavenly Desolate City: Big Fish Tide (1) - Arthrall2yrCommentedCh 148 148. Tsunade In Dama City
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I would suggest deleting the space marker before the L at the beginning.
le starved. The Irish chronicles record "a failure of bread from the years 536–539." - Arthrall2yrCommented
he should be older then this. giants live to be 300 years old
[Age: 32] - Arthrall2yrCommented
Moon instead of mood.
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shouldn't this be bobby??
This paragraph has been deleted. - Arthrall2yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: Comic Con!
- Arthrall2yrReplied to CrazyGuest
tried that. . . it didn't work sadly. . .
(A/N: The same spear on the cover of the story)detailReincarnation in One Piece: The Adventure of Ian Louis! [COMPLETE!]Anime & Comics · CrazyGuest - Arthrall2yrCommented
There isn't a spear on the cover. . . It is a picture of Robin with a hat.
(A/N: The same spear on the cover of the story)detailReincarnation in One Piece: The Adventure of Ian Louis! [COMPLETE!]Anime & Comics · CrazyGuest - Arthrall2yrCommentedCh 130 Extra Epilogue
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isn't Summer the owl? If so, how would she have fur??
Magnus' mood was immediately elevated to the fullest. He held the three in his arms and stroked Chad and Summer's fur while he patted Duck as he was a dragon and didn't have fur.