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A wonderfully charming piece, a few spelling/grammatical errors, but, not enough to take away from the story. Very intriguing and full of potential, there were a few spots in the first chapter that made me curious. Overall a wonderful read.
I'm yearning to read more it's absolutely brilliant! Character design and development flow so smoothly as you continue to read and the story development is spot on going from Naomi as a teenager to her as an adult. Her back story is brief yet full of necessary information that the reader needs to grasp an understanding of what she has been through and relating to Naomi I love. Please tell me once this is fully written you're sending this to a publisher.