You get the metaphor wrong. Mc feel scared and desperate. How come mc pray like a 1000yr saint? In the first place, 1000yr saint meant they already had an unwavering mind and heart. Yes, it is just a metaphor, but you got it wrong. Plus the metaphor was an exaggeration, it doesn’t give amazing example, but unnecessary disturbing thought to reader.
No one even questio mc where he get his mone y
Yeah the overuse cringe novel.
Won’t the victims get boiled or suffocated?
Sword can increase ranks but gun can’t?. Can’t be railgun, laser or proton ray?.
Hello, this isn’t math. You need trial and error to confirm.
Why don't he consider the people behind those powerful kid will chase after them.
Are you an idiot. You got the opportunity to leave now but you want to leave later after showing off your power?. Are you sure they'll let you leave unharmed, moreover you got your sister to protect. Did you forget how corrupted the guild is after reading this far.
So teaching a baby swordmanship at young age is normal. Pls tell me if he eat meat rather than drink mommy milk. There’s a reason a baby body is soft and fragile. Then again better throw commen sense put of window.But hey you need to have some acceptable commen sense to make your novel readable.
way too odd.
If i’m the mc. It better to stay silence and take my sister away from this guIld protection.Who know they will use her agaInst you.