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Key_To1yrCommentedCh 31 A Dream Of The Past- Key_To1yrCommented
First or Third elder
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First elder or Third elder
This book has been deleted. - Key_To1yrCommentedCh 18 The New Member
- Key_To1yrCommented
the T should be capitalized
The Doctor's office was brightened by the light entering through the glass on the window. The pleasant cooling from Ac combined with the light of the sun was creating comfort that one could think of as true bliss. - Key_To1yrCommented
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As I scanned, I saw that there were less periods per paragraph that it looks like it was a single sentence. It can be fixed. Also there are upper cased letter in the middle of a sentence. The grammar is not all over the place. No errors and was smooth to read. The story is about an overpowered God who choose to be incarnated in his juniors creation. So if you like overpowered mc with a drop of sexy stuff this is your cup of tea.
- Key_To1yrReplied to Kelvar10_
yes definitely đ but it is a perspective kind of maybeđ
One starless night, in Litch street, sat a man pondering important life choices. His dulled eyes aimlessly examined every passerby. A group of businessmen going to the bar, a couple opening and sharing one umbrella, or the father that carried his two daughters rushing to find shelter from the rain. The sight of kinship made him remember his family, sending shivers through his skin. - Key_To1yrPosted
A futuristic setting with mecha soldiers. synopsis is interesting and builds up the whole story but not fully revealing everything.
This book has been deleted. - Key_To1yrReplied to Kelvar10_
because its cloudy and rainingđ
One starless night, in Litch street, sat a man pondering important life choices. His dulled eyes aimlessly examined every passerby. A group of businessmen going to the bar, a couple opening and sharing one umbrella, or the father that carried his two daughters rushing to find shelter from the rain. The sight of kinship made him remember his family, sending shivers through his skin. - Key_To1yrCommentedCh 51 Heading Out
- Key_To1yrCommentedCh 55 The Boy Who's Cold
- Key_To1yrCommentedCh 54 When It Comes To The Light
- Key_To1yrCommentedThe Boy
- Key_To1yrCommentedCh 52 It's Not What It Is
- Key_To1yrCommentedCh 50 Don't Listen To His Words