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Just a guy who likes to read. A lot.

2017-12-04 JoinedUnited States
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  • IsUnavailable
    IsUnavailable2yr
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    You could also do the inverse where he spends a vast amount of time in the gap and only lives using HESOYAM all to get back to his family who only had a few days too a week or so pass. He could be Haunted by the Years of lonelyness as he made his way back and has to deal with surviving something that would almost garunteed drive you insane.

    Ch 92 Interaction.
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    MHA: 'Serene' Life in Another World
    Anime & Comics · Gonshido
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    IsUnavailable2yr
    Commented

    the thing is, this could still work in canon for both series. I am actually interested in how you will mesh these two together.

    Ch 88 News Coverage.
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    MHA: 'Serene' Life in Another World
    Anime & Comics · Gonshido
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    IsUnavailable2yr
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    Hello, I am the editor of this story ( IsUnavailable#4173 on discord) and, though I may be a little biased, this is one of my favorite stories on here. This story is a refreshing read after all the 'system', 'isekai', and 'reborn' stories on here. It stands out from the crowd and has interesting characters that can draw you in. Going over the five points: Writing Quality: as the editor I am (again) biased here, but I do my best to make sure this is as cleaned as possible and get rid of grammar errors and misused pronouns. Story development: The plot has a good pacing without stalling too long at the beginning with info. dumps or speeding along too fast and not properly fleshing out the story. All in all no complaints here. Character designs: Like I said before there are several interesting characters. The author does use some anime style tropes, but he makes sure the characters aren't just one note and have more to them with real motivations and backgrounds. I particularly like the main characters mother for her novel and interesting personality. Updating stability: The author and I strive to have a chapter a day release schedule so barring any illness or accident you will always have something new to read each day. (schedule changes are almost always mentioned in author notes or on the discord) World background: This story is mainly set in America and uses western style Vampires (and other paranormal creatures). This is a wonderful break from the predominantly eastern influenced stories on webnovel and the author does a great job at slowly revealing this new and interesting paranormal world as we learn about it through the eyes of the main character. To sum everything up, this is a refreshing and interesting read. Clean chapters with minimal errors (your welcome) and good update pacing. Definitely worth your time to at least give it a try. So, what are you waiting for? Go ahead and get reading.

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    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
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    IsUnavailable2yr
    Posted

    Great story with an interesting world, smart MC (so far) and a great love interest (yandere are the best). The story is great so far and only looks to get better as time goes on. Give it a try and I am sure you will find it as interesting as I do.

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    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
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  • IsUnavailable
    IsUnavailable2yr
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    I would say it is better to make an original story if you already have so much planned out. while you may get more visibility from making it a fan-fic it also makes it more restricted. If the story does really well it will also be easier to monetize since it will be original (if you care about that). Honestly, I also think an original story would be more fun to write anyway.

    Ch 1 [88] The fall
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    Anime & Comics · Anas_Nazim
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  • IsUnavailable
    IsUnavailable3yr
    Commented

    damnit I had to catch up here or all places. If I had any amount of free money I would immediately move to that one site that starts with a P. I guess I am reduced to waiting for the next post now.

    Ch 71 Chapter 71
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    Avatar The Last Airbender: Cold Paths
    Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
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  • IsUnavailable
    IsUnavailable3yr
    Replied to IsUnavailable

    I just had a trippy idea; if it's possible to make their arms invisible but project a hard light construct of their arms just a little longer over them (maybe only a few mm to at most a cm or two) they would start to fumble things because their sense of proprioception and touch would tell them their hands were further back, but their sight would show them something else. This may require some illusion metaphysics though.

    Ch 56 Chapter 56 Motivating the Students
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    Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
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  • IsUnavailable
    IsUnavailable3yr
    Commented

    easy prank idea would be to replace the chairs (and or desk) with hard light constructs and then turn them off in the middle of class. I think it would make for a good entry level prank if you hadn't already thought of it. Another idea could be a hard light projection of Harry that slowly changes proportions over the course of the class until either someone mentions it or he looks grotesque (bonus points if he could make it visible to only one student while everyone else saw him normally.)

    Ch 56 Chapter 56 Motivating the Students
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    Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
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  • IsUnavailable
    IsUnavailable3yr
    Replied to One_True_King

    clever

    -Agility: 4492+(D545)->(SSS1108
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    Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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  • IsUnavailable
    IsUnavailable3yr
    Replied to ProSpect

    The whole thing could be rigged against him though. If so, then they may disqualify him to get him out of there and into the open again.

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    Reaper (Being Re-written)
    Book&Literature · SykoNex
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