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pavan1117mthCommentedWell, it's time to EXTRACT
"So what? I'm a noble creature who controls the water. Blame your luck that I'm the one who's awake. If you don't pass the test before the sky turns dark, you'll fail and I'll expel you from this place…"- pavan1117mthCommented
the use of words determination and resolve are becoming increasingly cringe 😬
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REALLY!!! REALLY!!!!! YOU HANG US WITH THIS
He immediately checked his attribute panel. - pavan1111yrPosted
There is a quality issue in the beginning but I was able to read through the entire book with 2 sleepless nights. very good story with a good pacing and I did not loose Instreast till end. This is a story without endless chapters and never ending boring repetitions. I haven't given review to many novels events even though I read many. And this novel moved me and made me happy enough to spend time to write this review. hope everyone else feels the same.
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the above para said it costs 20 silver a wheel
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These numbers don’t make sense. 10000 credit with 3.5% return a year over 5 years will only give u around 12k
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is it a pipe? 5meters wide but 2.6km length.
"Only one ship is needed," Gorm calmly said. John opened his mouth but did not know what to say. In the end, he decided to just shut up. He then focused on this magnificent metal vessel that was 2.6 kilometers long and 5 meters wide. - pavan1112yrPosted
great story. very entertaining and I was hooked to it because of cliff hangers. although there is harem, that is not the story. harem is present because of the mc character.
detailMy Wife Is A General Who Killed Tens Of Thousands On The BattlefieldEastern · My Daughter is too Cute - pavan1112yrCommented
there is a difference between "becoming" and "be coming" when used after 'will.
Relomal looks at me with sadness I rarely see from the middle aged man. "I have a feeling that whatever the seers have divined will not come to happen, but war will becoming to our country. The orcs are amassing in force to the highest part of our continent. We are the first on there list since your mother killed the old king of the orcs." The orcs will ravage our country, kill our men and enslave and rape our women. The unification of the noble houses and gathering of our armies shouldn't have come at the cost of my mother and our countries lower classes. - pavan1112yrReplied to ChuBAKA101
There are too many issues with the novel up till now. pronouns used and stats showed are just the starters. Just reading this novel gives me a headache. not enjoyable. I am forced to use my brainpower just read through the mistakes. 🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️
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