The same as always, the story catches my attention but after about 10 chapters I'm dropping (which apparently has saved me at times XD). This person has some fetish with sexually active people, what this guy does is surreptitiously make you think that an FMC has something or feelings for the MC, and then it's like "they didn't have anything" "it was just your imagination" I think the fanfic that is the most I read it was the one about Naruto, I don't remember how long it arrived, what I do remember is that there was someone, I don't remember who I think it was Sakura, I even think I remember that they started a relationship and I said OK, nothing strange, but when I skipped chapters I was already with the MC. WTF? A relationship may not work out, perhaps many have already gone through it and others may still be experiencing it. But what I have realized is the typical pattern: a woman with a protagonist, a woman has nothing formal with the protagonist, a woman has relationships with other people, whether a man or woman, then the woman and the protagonist come together. What really bothers me about this and the one piece type is because they allow themselves to be bossed around or because they don't have their own opinion. If, in your mind, you want to make a fucking place where everyone happily holds hands around a bonfire and sings happily without any type of hierarchy... try it, you will most likely fail, but do it. I don't care if other people have ambitions, if they betray you or anything else, but try. It does seem like an NPC that if you tell it to go that way, that's where it goes. These are no longer suggestions, but rather they are ordered. And it is something constant that even gets tiring, which is why I say that they are no longer just suggestions. In the few chapters that I read, I felt tremendous disgust at the MC and Mordred for this very reason, and with this, I have realized that this author's stories are not for my. I wanted to know how Wil was doing, and I accumulated chapters to skip them and see if he improved, but somewhere around there I read a review that there was yuri or something like that, and I said I guessed it XD

I think it's a pretty stupid development, but it's better to leave it as it is.

Drop?

+1

Drop?

I honestly didn't like this chapter. Previously there were some unknowns but with this added to the world I feel that it overloads it with many things and all this transformations and that the protagonist has a second life so to speak, fighting against bugs personally I never liked it, you have thrown me a bucket of water. But we'll see where all this goes and if I'm honest I'm sorry you dropped the fanfic :( (Google Translate)

Dross?

LOL player?

Está bien, sentí que debio de pasar más tiempo en el mundo original y lo de los enemigos en Gaia al principio pense que era soportable pero según iba pasando el tiempo pensé "vaya mierda" básicamente me aburri y sentí que este fanfic no iba a terminar en un corto tiempo, así que me dio hueva y perdí el interés. Tanta mierda que hacer y pones una mamada de ir a otro mundo a salvar al planeta y no se que, puedo entender si es para hacerse fuerte rápidamente pero se sintió como una kk. Lo del libro ese, sinceramente pensé vaya cagada, puede viajar con el sistema pero se darían cuenta se siente un desperdicio. No había mucha interacción con las mujeres de los mundos anteriores y con el tiempo se hicieron olvidables. Los 2 primeros mundos los senti bien pero lo demás al menos en lo personal no me agradó tanto peor en el mundo actual, fue bueno para pasar el rato tenía un tiempo sin leer algo.

Al chile mucha paja escribistes XD

Quizas cambiar algo de los inicio, porque sinceramente si me dio ganas de dejarlo caer si no fuera porque no tenia nada que hacer y estaba bien aburrido.