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the best that i could think is for you to maintain the essence of this fic. And remake it. I liked this game console god thing that you thought up but i think you could have focused on the game itself and may i sugest that you look up the overlord anime for an interesting game system that could be very free and innovative to not fall on the vice of common cliches it is pretty interesting and might make up for the lack of overlord fanfic that fresh out iggdrasil game system. It would be fun to think their reactions to turning into heteromorph or demihumans.đđ