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indecisive MC with endless monologue that just doesn't get anywhere....at first he gonna get as many girl as possible n use his system to get stronger just so he can lead a peaceful life then he cheat on his girlfriend once and start the endless self reproach n all that shit.he turn into indecisive chicken switching back n front.at times he fell they are just his girlfriends not married or something so he can cheat on them then start back endless monologue of self reproach..this is not character development just pure torture ...author mention his desire for peaceful life in lot of his endless monologue ..if he want that life should just drop out of academy,hes plenty strong already and will keep getting stronger...
mc would put his life in danger to save a college friend he didnt see for years....i realy hate this sacrificial type mc's....what next he gonna put his life on line for every member of his group... the story was good so far but this totaly kill the mood to read it...
but the problem is we dont know his inner thought......all i can see is a knight in white armor with hero complex who go around saving people and helping people and all...its not anti hero..just a saint....if the MC has a scheme n not helping out of kindness of his heart at least let the readers know give him a inner monologue or something...u will lose a lot of readers by keeping it as a suspense to reveal later....
the storys gettin worse...dumb mc...he dont want to get involve the get involve without planning anything just to get screew right over...he point to harry that peter is in the map N then when he bring lupin with him using the map he act shock how they got there...finally gettin rid of this werewolf thing now theres a spirit in his head or soul rent free...I like to read HP fanfic n tis novel despite the grammar worse than MT translate i enjoy the beginning but now......hard to support the author when hes butchering his own story......
seem dumb...shes been doing covert operation for Hephaestus for years n not get caught cant she do this witout gettin expose, she would know that her team will help her n get in trouble because of this n this gonna put her goddess in a spot but still go and gettin expose....she got her freedom now n could have collect information n wait for the right time...seems like shes just using them to get her revenge...
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the reason i hate the sin arc was because he was manipulated by it but at least he recover from it but now he's being manipulated by his future self without knowing it...its like the sin arc all over again but theres no end to it coz we dont know how much he get mess in the head... I HATE STORY WITH MC BEING MANIPULATED...
this vault thing is getting boring n him getting hurt in every single of them....i like it when he interact with other character not just doing trial after trial.....its original n interesting at first but now just plain boring...hes Interaction with the KRAKEN was nice...
i usually read 50 chapter before continue or drop a novel but i drop this at C41........the plot are a mess...i dont understand where the story is going,this is chinese cultivation with western setting then hes kowtowing to his parents before leaving them....i dont understand the setting anymore...he act live evil n cruel MC then act like beta simp to the girl his mother force on him cuz he wont say no to his mother...then he leave the family home bringing the girl with him...she gonna ask for food n all then hes gonna think its so annoying but still do what she ask...hes leaving the family when theres lot of people targetting him even the king...i dont know if his guards that much stronger to protect him... I really like the concept of this novel with a EVIL CANNIBAL MC wreaking havoc in the world...i never read a novel with cannibal mc before so that kinde new but NOT gonna torture myself with this one....