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  • raj114
    raj11411d
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    indecisive MC with endless monologue that just doesn't get anywhere....at first he gonna get as many girl as possible n use his system to get stronger just so he can lead a peaceful life then he cheat on his girlfriend once and start the endless self reproach n all that shit.he turn into indecisive chicken switching back n front.at times he fell they are just his girlfriends not married or something so he can cheat on them then start back endless monologue of self reproach..this is not character development just pure torture ...author mention his desire for peaceful life in lot of his endless monologue ..if he want that life should just drop out of academy,hes plenty strong already and will keep getting stronger...

    MHA: Living as Mineta is hard
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • raj114
    raj1144mth
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    mc would put his life in danger to save a college friend he didnt see for years....i realy hate this sacrificial type mc's....what next he gonna put his life on line for every member of his group... the story was good so far but this totaly kill the mood to read it...

    Ch 23 Allan - Suicide Mission?
    Code Zulu Alpha: Nerd in the Apocalypse!
    Horror · Sky2316
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  • raj114
    raj1145mth
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    there are in tis mess because he got arrogant n take on a s class mission without seeing what it is...N didnt he ask for one where he can cancel at will then why did parkins give him one from world council...story get worse by the chapters...

    Ch 72 Draco's Promise
    Guild Wars
    Games · Kotario
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  • raj114
    raj1145mth
    Replied to An1k3tk

    if that ANT create me n i was program to be loyal to it..

    Ch 14 The Rebirth
    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
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    thought it was his house...she's freeloading at his house, eating his food N ordering him around...MC is too much of MR.nice guy...

    Ch 232 Young Lady’s Visit
    Super Detective in the Fictional World
    Sci-fi · Icy Plain's Three Elegance
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
    Replied to don_offl

    but the problem is we dont know his inner thought......all i can see is a knight in white armor with hero complex who go around saving people and helping people and all...its not anti hero..just a saint....if the MC has a scheme n not helping out of kindness of his heart at least let the readers know give him a inner monologue or something...u will lose a lot of readers by keeping it as a suspense to reveal later....

    Ch 24 Meeting the Sunrise Sect
    Hitman with a Badass System
    Action · don_offl
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
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    the storys gettin worse...dumb mc...he dont want to get involve the get involve without planning anything just to get screew right over...he point to harry that peter is in the map N then when he bring lupin with him using the map he act shock how they got there...finally gettin rid of this werewolf thing now theres a spirit in his head or soul rent free...I like to read HP fanfic n tis novel despite the grammar worse than MT translate i enjoy the beginning but now......hard to support the author when hes butchering his own story......

    Ch 128 Chapter 128
    Harry Potter: New World
    Movies · HPMan
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
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    i really hate it when MC give stuff up for free especially to strangers....he dont even know the old man or felt indebt to him in the future...hate this overly generous MC's....

    Ch 103 Pavilion's Problem
    Way of the Knights
    Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
    Commented

    seem dumb...shes been doing covert operation for Hephaestus for years n not get caught cant she do this witout gettin expose, she would know that her team will help her n get in trouble because of this n this gonna put her goddess in a spot but still go and gettin expose....she got her freedom now n could have collect information n wait for the right time...seems like shes just using them to get her revenge...

    Ch 152 CHAPTER 152(Treason)
    Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
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    he still doesnt know how to deal with Jörmungandr. still want to skip rank where everyone is stronger than him...mc gettin dummer by the chapter...hes basically winning by the skin in his current rank.. the early chapters was good but now.....

    Ch 222 Rank Skip Coupon!
    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
    Commented

    for a guy with 20+ years of experience, he is making a lot of stupid mistake.....

    Ch 218 The Rain Forest's Players Are Making a Move!
    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
    Replied to LordVileTheGay

    same...

    Seriously...what had I done to deserve to have such an amazing person in my life?
    Dysfunctional - An Assassin's Guide to Reincarnating in Another World
    Fantasy · Aimdaqs
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
    Commented

    the MC is gettin pathetic by the minute....why give him a background of a assassins if hes just gonna act like typical japanese lightnovel beta mc...LAME...

    Ch 30 Chapter 29 - Road to Goldway(Part 1)
    Dysfunctional - An Assassin's Guide to Reincarnating in Another World
    Fantasy · Aimdaqs
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
    Commented

    story gettin worse by minute....MC just leave a proofs,his magic signature around dumbledore whom he know is one of the greatest wizard alive...he love magic,adore magic but he also have to fear magic.

    Ch 378 Finally Visible
    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
    Commented

    the reason i hate the sin arc was because he was manipulated by it but at least he recover from it but now he's being manipulated by his future self without knowing it...its like the sin arc all over again but theres no end to it coz we dont know how much he get mess in the head... I HATE STORY WITH MC BEING MANIPULATED...

    Ch 310 The Second Coming of Balbh
    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
    Commented

    this vault thing is getting boring n him getting hurt in every single of them....i like it when he interact with other character not just doing trial after trial.....its original n interesting at first but now just plain boring...hes Interaction with the KRAKEN was nice...

    Ch 103 Leviathan's Underpass, and The Raven
    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
    Replied to SADISTIC_NEED

    hmmm..i think i'll let the chapter accumulate to around 1K+ and binge it....

    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
    Replied to Lucas_Sousa_7129

    exactly my thought bro..... i hate force separation troope the most N with how slow the story progress its gonna take a long time....

    Ch 345 High Functioning Psychopath
    Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
    Fantasy · Grayback
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
    Posted

    i usually read 50 chapter before continue or drop a novel but i drop this at C41........the plot are a mess...i dont understand where the story is going,this is chinese cultivation with western setting then hes kowtowing to his parents before leaving them....i dont understand the setting anymore...he act live evil n cruel MC then act like beta simp to the girl his mother force on him cuz he wont say no to his mother...then he leave the family home bringing the girl with him...she gonna ask for food n all then hes gonna think its so annoying but still do what she ask...hes leaving the family when theres lot of people targetting him even the king...i dont know if his guards that much stronger to protect him... I really like the concept of this novel with a EVIL CANNIBAL MC wreaking havoc in the world...i never read a novel with cannibal mc before so that kinde new but NOT gonna torture myself with this one....

    Monarch of Darkness, Arsene
    Fantasy · Lord_Damocles
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  • raj114
    raj1141yr
    Commented

    if grandmaster rank blacksmith is that rare couldn't he just sell his servitude to one of this big clan n have them avenge his family much earlier than just waiting for his dead......the noble in flavot city wouldn't be much problem for this big clans...

    Ch 147 The Friendship
    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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