A fun read

yes please

I wonder if it's maybe a big teleporting dog?

F

No

feel better

Sounds cool

Harranhall seems logical and more interesting

writings coherent and engaging like the ideas and look forward to more seems like it will be pretty great

glad you didn't :)

The thing

i like it

glad this is still going

Its a shame I liked reading this but I am looking forward to your new stuff thanks for all the fun :)

maybe make it an OC someone he meets as his assassin persona first maybe an up and coming merc or assassin

loved reading this I am going to miss it thanks for all the fun.

yes the mc is weak to women it would make sense for him to save her or at least try to

you make good points and i agree mainly on making money on fan-fiction which i really hope does not catch on and that if we wanted to pay for stories a lot of us wouldn't be reading fan-fiction in the first place i just felt the need to inform people of the actual costs

I like this story and i know others do also before you scream that you wont read it anymore just look at the price its 1.50 a month its not that bad i hope this sort of thing doesn't catch on though

that was a great chapter