maybe let him go to DC to mess with Lucifer there, it would be funny

+1

ty for the chapter

okay, Just don't drop It, because i liked It :)

yes sir

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

+1

+1

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well, i know that write a story or fan-fiction is a very difficult thing to do. In my opinion is better you rework it. I'm not saying that the story itself is bad, i liked it alot but if you fell burned by it, is better you change it because later on you may drop it. so in my opinion the best option is the 2º one but the 1º is good too, if you choose the 1º, you can change the world that the MC may go. In the end is your choice.

Thanks for the chapter bro, but is there a link for the untranslated one?

vlw pelo capítulo irmão

Maybe here

you can continue with the story, but if it confuse you a little you can try to rewrite it, bcs that way you can change something a little or not

you said that your computer broke, but did the whole computer broke or some hardwares? you can try to see if there is some hardware that's still working and only buy the ones that you need

Hey man, are gonna continue the history? bcs if i'm not wrong you put this in hiatus bcs of some problems.

welcome back :)

ahh it's okay, but it is still funny

it's funny you write in English and Portuguese at the same paragraphs