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Marschmallow

Marschmallow

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2017-06-11 JoinedUnited States
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow1yr
    Commented

    The comments praising the author or defending the mc are super cringe.

    Ch 2 The End
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    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow1yr
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    Anime & Comics · Ares_One_Piece
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow1yr
    Replied to Valtura

    no problem I got you bro

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    Becoming a Monster
    Fantasy · Valtura
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow1yr
    Posted

    If the synopsis is already written poorly, why would you even start to read?

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    Becoming a Monster
    Fantasy · Valtura
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow1yr
    Posted

    The main character just gets one power up after the next. The story feels empty, because there is no build up. There are also a lot of logical errors in this novel. Cant recommend this one. The premise sounds good and the writing quality is acceptable but if you are a few chapters in you notice you are eating shit.

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    MMORPG : Rise of the Interstellar God
    Games · Hamapo
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow2yr
    Posted

    Its bad----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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    From Village Chief to Emperor of the Strongest Empire
    Fantasy · Potato
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow2yr
    Posted

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    My Gu Can Cultivate on Their Own
    Eastern · Furious Pimple
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow2yr
    Replied to Eddicted

    The problem is not with the Chinese authors. Its the website chosing these garbage novels. There are still plenty of good novels that could be translated. They probably want to promote the original works with this as it is cheaper for them than translating.

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    My Gu Can Cultivate on Their Own
    Eastern · Furious Pimple
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow2yr
    Replied to Marschmallow

    and he would only need to mention the 1 to 24 time ratio to explain why he thinks its a good idea to buy these items. But maybe he is not smart enough

    Ch 2 Buy The Most Expensive Items
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    Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game
    Eastern · Saubi1234
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow2yr
    Commented

    some criticism: - Why is his past life not enought? why does he have to get the most op talent? - She is a world class hacker and programmer? and she is it because she loves science? thats a bit stupid. I wouldnt be surprised if it turned out she was a world class Chemist and Physicist as well

    Ch 2 Buy The Most Expensive Items
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    Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game
    Eastern · Saubi1234
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow3yr
    Replied to LordOzzy

    if they live together thats even more stupid

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    The Era of Gods
    Sci-fi · Become a Taoist Overnight
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow3yr
    Replied to LordOzzy

    A race of divine beings, who can create their own worlds calling themselves human federation is stupid. Its like calling a nation on earth Ant rebuplic

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    The Era of Gods
    Sci-fi · Become a Taoist Overnight
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow3yr
    Commented

    Its kinda ridiculous to call the government human federation if every individual is a god

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    The Era of Gods
    Sci-fi · Become a Taoist Overnight
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow3yr
    Commented

    He had almost forgotten it but it left a deep impression. IDIOCY and PLOTHOLES it already starts in the first chapter

    Her merciless, cold, and ugly death had left a deep impression on his soul that day.
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    King of Assassins
    Eastern · Master Stepping on Snow
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow3yr
    Commented

    where would he get books. Too many things are not explained . I will stop reading this shit now

    The fragrance of books could be said to permeate the entire Yale City.
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    Starting With a City as a Transmigrator
    Eastern · Sheng Sheng Has a City
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow3yr
    Commented

    If you have so much money on earth, just hire a city planner

    So how would he know what kind of design plan the current Yale City needed?
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    Starting With a City as a Transmigrator
    Eastern · Sheng Sheng Has a City
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow3yr
    Commented

    You have to at least write a few month later. There is no perception of time

    "My lord, our population is really huge now!"
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    Starting With a City as a Transmigrator
    Eastern · Sheng Sheng Has a City
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow3yr
    Commented

    Nothing is explained. Where would he get the materials.

    Not only that, but Wang Lun also used simple materials to build greenhouses to let the crops mature at the fastest speed.
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    Starting With a City as a Transmigrator
    Eastern · Sheng Sheng Has a City
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow3yr
    Commented

    yeah starving peasants? who has time to think of those

    Wang Lun hadn't really thought about these problems beforehand. After all, this was his first time as a city lord.
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    Starting With a City as a Transmigrator
    Eastern · Sheng Sheng Has a City
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  • Marschmallow
    Marschmallow3yr
    Commented

    thats stupid as if peasants could read. Too many plotholes D: . He should have towncriers distribute the message

    Wang Lun handed over the paper in his hand, saying, "Copy these words onto a large stack of paper and have them distributed."
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    Starting With a City as a Transmigrator
    Eastern · Sheng Sheng Has a City
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