Marschmallow
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The main character just gets one power up after the next. The story feels empty, because there is no build up. There are also a lot of logical errors in this novel. Cant recommend this one. The premise sounds good and the writing quality is acceptable but if you are a few chapters in you notice you are eating shit.
some criticism: - Why is his past life not enought? why does he have to get the most op talent? - She is a world class hacker and programmer? and she is it because she loves science? thats a bit stupid. I wouldnt be surprised if it turned out she was a world class Chemist and Physicist as well
if they live together thats even more stupid
A race of divine beings, who can create their own worlds calling themselves human federation is stupid. Its like calling a nation on earth Ant rebuplic
Its kinda ridiculous to call the government human federation if every individual is a god
He had almost forgotten it but it left a deep impression. IDIOCY and PLOTHOLES it already starts in the first chapter
where would he get books. Too many things are not explained . I will stop reading this shit now
If you have so much money on earth, just hire a city planner
You have to at least write a few month later. There is no perception of time
Nothing is explained. Where would he get the materials.
yeah starving peasants? who has time to think of those
thats stupid as if peasants could read. Too many plotholes D: . He should have towncriers distribute the message