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  • Freeza
    Freeza5d
    Commented

    had -> head

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    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
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  • Freeza
    Freeza1mth
    Commented

    *to call

    "Will do." The chain in his chest become visible for an instant while Trion used it so call Valia, and Locrias.
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • Freeza
    Freeza1mth
    Commented

    as *she freed

    "You might have his face but you are truly nothing like him," Vera's voice chimed with a tone of disregard as freed one of her arm and touched G2's right wrist.
    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
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  • Freeza
    Freeza2mth
    Commented

    pleased -> pleasing

    While her mouth pleased Su Yang's rod, she used her hands to massage the sacks below.
    Dual Cultivation
    Eastern · MyLittleBrother
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  • Freeza
    Freeza2mth
    Commented

    *majority

    "The drought appeared on our planet of origin that wiped out major of our species… the tablet had informed our first ancestors that they needed to move to another place entirely for our species to flourish but they chose not to listen until they had no other choice but to move.
    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
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  • Freeza
    Freeza3mth
    Commented

    *her

    "I have to leave now," Gustav reminded me.
    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
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  • Freeza
    Freeza3mth
    Commented

    the word "not" after could should be removed

    Havenly Quintessential Obfuscation had been elevated to the extent that now, Noah could erase his existence passively and actively against weaker Entities on the Fifth Gradation of Extremity! It was along the lines of Inscrutable as with Obfuscation, now could not be standing inches away from an Entity that had traversed less than a fourth of the Fifth Gradation of Extremity as they…would not be able to see him.
    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • Freeza
    Freeza3mth
    Commented

    their concept *then*

    {The Seventeenth Boundary Layer of Plagiarism}:: Plagiarism comes in many forms, with the best plagiarists capable of taking someone else's work and passing it off entirely as their own- going even further to surpass the original. This Boundary Layer sees the countless concepts out there as it seeks to make them yours. At its current stage, you can plagiarize a Concept of Extremity that has reached the 17th Boundary Layer from a selected target visible to you, their concept that becoming etched into your Records as if it were yours to begin with, and that reality has always been this way. The target will have the selected concept entirely erased from their Records as truly, it was all yours to begin with- you never even plagiarized. When taken to Extremity, the Boundary of Plagiarism will allow you to plagiarize up to 81 Concepts of Extremity of targets with similar or lesser Soul Values, and the possibilities to plagiarize Items or even the very Records of Entities themselves become possible….
    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • Freeza
    Freeza4mth
    Commented

    *Seer Avenus

    The voice was a cold and somber one as it stemmed from the Seer Amestris who displayed dozens of illusory screens that showed scenes from all branches within the Seven Nether Havens of Extremity…in addition to what had just occurred for their forces fighting the Vacuous Hyperversal Legions!
    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • Freeza
    Freeza4mth
    Commented

    counter her move

    The Tier 4 Vacuous Extremity who was waiting to see how Noah would counter his move was dumbfounded.
    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • Freeza
    Freeza4mth
    Commented

    call forth

    Instead of requiring 100 Extremity Soul Values to pull back the bowstring and fall forth a Hyperversal Projectile of Helios, he only needed 1 Quintessential Hyperversal Extremity Soul Value as the requirement of Extremity Mana Values was inconsequential at this moment- his transformation of this type of Mana already reaching 1 million from 100,000 after the tenths of seconds passed.
    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • Freeza
    Freeza4mth
    Commented

    would be *an* even

    It was time for the Vitalistic Clone to rerun to Noah, along with the stupendous gains that had been made as he would be even greater fuel for a shockingly Quintessential foundation.
    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • Freeza
    Freeza4mth
    Commented

    had -> has

    Quintessence…had to be the first concept that Noah brought to Extremity.
    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • Freeza
    Freeza5mth
    Commented

    they *headed

    And now, they needed into the waves of Vacuous Hyperversal Authority in the surroundings as Noah directed his poisonous will towards a Hyperversal Savior's Ark to the right of the massive one he was in.
    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • Freeza
    Freeza5mth
    Commented

    as *they

    His simple rising motion caused the surrounding reality to begin trembling, the nearby Extremities beginning to feel a heavy pressure rousing from him as he became alarmed!
    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • Freeza
    Freeza5mth
    Commented

    have *to trade

    {3 Blood Sources for becoming employees of the Infernal Havenly Commerce. Use whatever means you have trade as this will decide how much more you receive in remuneration…work hard.}
    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • Freeza
    Freeza5mth
    Commented

    *in his

    The Vitalis Hyperversal Authority is his body became extremely active as it seemed intent on making many impossible things a reality.
    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • Freeza
    Freeza6mth
    Commented

    only *on* the

    But Noah sent his will into it and activated such a wonder as a moment later, the statue cracked and radiated glorious golden light- a massive illusory figure of a woman with her eyes closed appearing above Noah's Havens, her hand waving outwards as seas of golden essence rained down only the forming Fifth Aletheian Haven of Extremity as if it was rain hitting a dry earth!
    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • Freeza
    Freeza6mth
    Commented

    *for

    "Just because Earth abandoned the humans and native species in Planet Vesper to cater fod themselves doesn't mean I would slaughter them all. They're not responsible for the Ancient Hourglass hiding itself in the core of their planet so they don't deserve to be punished for it," Gustav shook his head. 
    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
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  • Freeza
    Freeza6mth
    Commented

    *standing

    Gustav reached out to grab a figure who seemed to be stajding in the middle of a slightly exalted platform which emitted a red glow.
    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
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