More like die of shame, and to think he was laughing at others for coughing blood.

Sometimes it is really hard to ignore misinformation. From I remember Kiao-ken was a self-harming powerup, so while powerful, it put a lot of stress on the body. I think 100x was the supposed limit, Super Saiyan was 50x but once mastered was 100x. I admit I might be mixing up fanon and fanfiction information to get those numbers.------------------------------------------------------------ Once trained Super Saiyan was the better choice as it was less stressful on the body and could be used longer. Kiao-ken had the negatives of the bulky Super Saiyan mode that Trunks used against Cell (poor speed and flexibility) along with Super Saiyan 3s extreme drain of Ki and Stamina.------------------------------------------------------------------ When all that is considered it is obvious why Kiao-ken fell out of use, it was an imperfect technique. For Ayaka, though it might be near perfect, the female form is slimmer so the bulkiness would be less pronounced. Additionally the damage and pressure it causes she can near-instantly recover from. It could potentially cause small Zenkai's the whole time it is in use.

The irony being the title was given to them for losing the fight against Hanzo. Sure they did fairly well and impressed him but ultimately had he felt like it all three would have died. Personally, I wouldn't be very happy being respected and celebrated because of such an event.

Unlike previous times when people complained about the team selection, I've got a different point to make. Team 8 was originally Kurenai's tracking team. So Hinata was already going to be there. Kiba going to team 7 made sense since Naruto was no longer last but first instead. That would have made the team Shino, Hinata and Naruto. Either with emotion-sensing or Chakra-sensing Naruto could have fit, no manipulation needed. Shino was rather dull but was skilled. Having his bugs also made him a natural strategist always having to command and pick the best way to use them. Since he was dull ignoring him for the most part is easy, he doesn't need to be conversations as he normally was silent and stoic. So Shikamaru was not needed for that and Shikamaru's ability has a lot less use, needing specific conditions to use. Hinata with gentle-fist can seal an opponent, Shino with his bugs can seal an opponent, Kurenai with Genjutsu can seal an opponent and Naruto with seals could seal an opponent. No one in that set-up would have needed situations forced to make them useful for the team, as Hinata's eyes would always be useful just like Shino's bugs. Kurenai with Genjutsu was also the biggest weakness all three had so she could help them over it. Additionally, since she was supposed to be as skilled as Itachi in Genjutsu, she could in theory have been able to handle Naruto should he lose control, since Kakashi was instead dealing with the last Uchiha and Sharingan.

She happily married Draco, so yes she really is an idiot. Well maybe she was forced into it? Either way its not exactly a ringing endorsement of someone's intelligence. As someone from the house of cunning and ambition either she lacked those traits as she never used them to avoid the marriage or she used them to get a wealthy good looking husband that she could easily control. We can only guess based on the results which go against her.

Now I can only imagine when something goes wrong with the system (interference, updates and system downs etc) all he will see is a certain 'blue screen of death' and with such a name it might happen quite regularly...

It did feel like the most awkward solution to the problem when trying to say the harem or lovers will only be Dorea and Helena, so it really did feel like you were making hard on yourself for no reason. Well, you have a mix of Harry Potter and Marvel world setting so if you create a 'futa' potion it is still in the lower end of odd and bizarre things that exist in either world, canon or not. Just get MC and Helena to work on it and that covers his contribution to the solution without getting physical or donating his DNA to the mix. At any rate, glad you were aware though of the risks and backlash it could cause. Honestly, with enough details, rules and restrictions in another conversation between the characters, the setting you've created could work. Though I think there will likely be those that see it another form of clones but that's another rabbit hole altogether, that I'd rather not get into.

Because the potion will cause them to assume the form of the one who's hair is used. Darla would be completely against it being any other male making the MC the only real choice. Not sure about same s/e/x couples but using a friend isn't all that uncommon for a donor and before the science did it, it was likely done often when adoption wasn't an option. I even remember having to read a novel where such an event took place for an English Literature class. That said the girl was something like a servant or lower class citizen while the guy was an old general or something but his wife was either too old or barren I can't remember which. I do remember the wife was there during it holding her to make it as unpleasant as possible. I forget what it was called but it was in some sort of dystopian setting. Though as a sign of the times and my corruption, now it just sounds like a h/e/n/t/a/i plot (the whole setting and idea, not so much the novel I read in my English class).

It took me a while to work up the resolve to put this comment. The fact I've had depression for 15 years makes it that I do understand how hard and bad it can be. Still though, I feel the need to question some of the latter portions of this chapter. I understand how these scenes came about. The current time frame makes it that no-one would allow a same s/e/x couple to adopt. The problem I have is with the solution. It sounds good at first but if you think a little more then problems start to appear. From the way you phrased it, Ana is the one who would become a mother, and Ana is the one who is Bi. This creates some risk for the relationships. Though to be fair it would still be risky even if she wasn't, some relationships are about love, others just scratch that itch that becomes a need. The 4 of them were inseparable during their school years and they do 'love' each other, in one form or another. The potion will make it so by DNA he is a minor contributor but it will be his 'form' that is assumed during s/e/x. I know this isn't a h/e/n/t/a/i where having s/e/x makes you a slave to your partner but the pleasure and chemicals the body creates during it could be enough to reasonably shift or influence Ana's feelings, from love to a friend to one of a l/o/v/e/r. I'm not saying it will make her love him, but l/u/s/t is a reasonable outcome and maybe and unavoidable one. Now would it be just a one-time thing, would they work it so it is 100% going to get her pregnant or would it need to be repeated until it succeeds? Even if it is a 'sure thing' if they want another kid, do they do the same again? Depending on how it works it can become a very poor choice for a solution. Would it not be better to use the potion to make them look like a 'normal' couple to adopt. That or just use magic or telepathy to force it through since once the paperwork is done they can do as they like afterwards. I am assuming they were going to the 'muggle' world to adopt I can't imagine there being a lot of orphanages in wizarding Britain. They used their psychic powers to over-take a secret agency and to mind control the King when he was being a pain, so I really don't see why using it to help now hasn't been considered. Well regardless, from the way the chapter ended, I feel it doesn't need to be changed as Darla hasn't given her response yet. So it can be worked around in the next chapter or clear up some of the potential issues to make it a more acceptable solution. The novel is great and I do hope your depression never reaches a level where you can't write or communicate with your readers. This comment is because it felt to me as you were setting yourself up a fall with all the potential issues and negative feedback that could come from this chapters plots. Maybe you already had considered these issues and already had solutions planned but if not, then now is the time to think about them and how to handle them.

I like the idea of Warcraft but it is a very hard one to write about. There is so much lore and so many events that happen, it makes it almost impossible to plan for. The only good way to do is by picking a certain event or boss that would be the focus and leave after it is done or you would be there forever. Lich King would probably the best one as the races involved haven't gone daft yet (Pandora) and while difficult he is more reasonable an enemy than some of the future ones. The idea that most of them are undead or corrupted should make it easier to handle for anyone who might join him. With that said, I'd probably make it an option for later when he has a few companions to join him. As for Shanks going One Piece I'd either skip it or go to a different time line as in, before Luffy's adventure. I guess you could also make it an AU and authors Shanks replaces the original due to some kind of world laws and only one can exist in any one time line.

First I'm British and fully agree how stupid and backward British Wizards are, at least in Harry Potter. It is not to say there are no individuals that actually show promise and individuality but for the most part by the laws and traditions the British Wizarding World is doomed. So while it can be considered racist as others said but it is only when someone foreign says it, as in they are not British and more so British Wizards. Rather than racist, I think stereotyped is a better way to describe it.

Keep it. I've seen some authors that would finish the story in one world and count that book done with and then start a new book in the next continuing the adventures on the previous MC in a new world. The upside to this is you can finish a story/book and be happy that it is complete but leave that slightly open end where he starts the next adventure, in this case by creating a portal. Then if you feel the need or drive can then start a new book in whatever world you chose. At most, you can do a quick recap chapter about his powers and anyone continuing the adventure with him. I think this puts the least pressure on you as the author. It also means you can take a break between books for research purposes or just to wait until you have more time to start the next one. A completed book with a break is always better than putting a long-running one on hold/hiatus.

Waisetsu Missile: The Animation. Though it contains two different stories and its the 2nd one that has the cowgirl.

I can't help but laugh at this typo and I'll you why. 'you don't blame the knife if it stabs you but the person who did it' Which is true and can't argue with at all but if you use the word 'stub' now this makes me think of something else. I'm everyone has experienced at least once stubbing their toe against something. The thing is it is always you who moved into the object in question but you don't take responsibility for it, no you blame the object instead. So if you did somehow 'stub' yourself with a knife, you actually blame the knife and not the person who did it.

I don't think it is related. I mean just think of Tony Stark, can you really imagine the guy being a good teacher? As for our MC being a bad teacher, I think it makes sense. He learnt the skills from the system, they were basically imprinted on him becoming second nature even if they were quickly reduced to a basic level. He never learnt them the normal way and so will be trying to teach something he can do by instinct probably even relying on anime knowledge since that includes the how. I think it puts him in a situation akin to trying to teach someone how to breathe or digest food. We do it automatically, with very limited ways to adjust the process. A good teacher has the knowledge, methods and patience to teach and our MC is lacking in every aspect. The comedy aside, the result is natural.

I wonder how the author views the fact that these chapters with Rei trolling the Mizukage are my favourite, that they are the chapters I look forward to most. I mean sure I like the powers and the interactions between the rest of the cast but none of that compares to the enjoyment these chapters provide. It will be a sad day when the Mizukage dies or Rei leaves, whichever comes first.

I honestly wouldn't know and trying to google it would take too long plus geography was a weak subject for me so where India is placed to surrounding countries may make it a moot point. I named so many areas to try and cover for that issue as I would have more likely named areas in easier reach before industrialisation. That said my entire point was how pretty much every country will have their share of wars and other dark aspects of history if you look back far enough. Things like Vikings and Romans are pretty much seen as cool by most people but the actual events and practices are rather dark. Not exactly UK history but Cowboys and Indians are something that often gets made lite of (heck, it became a game kids play) when the results were bloody, to say the least. Then you have the likes of Persia, Ottoman Empire and I'm sure others but that is the extent of what I remember from my history lessons in the UK. Most countries will have dark pasts whereby their own cultures they commit acts that today we would consider barbaric or whatever. From ritual sacrifice to slaves to war and even how they ruled with an iron fist resorting to execution, maiming and torture as punishments. Often the local religion being a major contributor in and how and why such things happen. I'm not trying to excuse or justify the acts Britain has done but rather point out that nowhere is without sin in history as greed or desperation usually play a role in these happenings and such aspects of human nature are unavoidable regardless of where you are from. As I said the Britain/India history is more recent and it did completely change India's cultures and way of life, so it stands out compared to things further into the past but they will exist. This is the main point I'm trying to make, the rest is just reasons and examples of how, when and why.

Judging by the comments I'm the only one who heard that as an Ali G reference and of course voice and accent to match.

Well said. Anyway, it has been years since I was in school so my memory may mix a few things up. Points to bring up are beside the last 150-200 years ignoring France and Spain, Britain was usually the one being invaded. Most notably the Vikings and Romans both completely took over and rewrote history and overrode the cultures of the day. Then you have the 4 countries that makeup Britain being England, Scotland, Wales and Ireland. These 4 were at each other throats for centuries in bloody battles. Mass murders, genocide, pillaging and everything that goes with it, all subtly shifting the native's cultures from the wars and occupations (as in taking over towns, cities and countries) all again forcing change. These things are not unique to Britain, every country has its own dark past. The biggest difference is nowadays records are better kept and in some cases, people are still alive after experiences these events that shift peoples entire way of life. Now for the likes of India, I expect the British rule during the Empire and its colonies era was the first meeting of the two countries in conflict. Until that time the two were simply too far apart for war to happen. That said I have no doubt that India will have had its wars as both the invader and as the one being invaded many many times before Britain got there. I honestly wouldn't be surprised if certain parts of Europe, as well as Asia (as in the big 3, China, Japan and Korea) and African Nations, had conflicts in the past. The only thing is they are so far back in history that the grudges are basically forgotten. That is how I think most brits see the Romans and Vikings, that Italy along with Rome and Denmark etc have no relation to the things that happened back then. As for things like slaves, for the most part, I think most counties always had them just relatively small scale. The industrial era basically made the scale explode like never before. Even back when you were talking tribal settlements, if they tribe was to expand they would attack others to take what they need, kill those they don't, keep the women and put some men to work. World War 2 being the most extreme recent memory showed a country would still do it to boost their workforce and army. Then to lesser degrees, some of the conflicts in the Middle-East still show such things still happen even in this day and age.

I think the bigger issue is the fact that these spars aren't supposed to include weapons or Jutsu but instead should be just an old fashioned brawl. Since from what we know aside from clan kids, the rest haven't learnt anything but the academy 3. This isn't to say they won't know any but just inside the academy, they shouldn't use them. A full-on fight using everything they know would either be in secret or under the supervision of parents or clan members. At least this is how it is during Naruto's era in Kohona, chances are most the current adults grew up in one war or the other and the rules would have been different.