I don't watch filler episodes....Soo yeah.

I couldn't make it past chapter 9. This novel seems to be going nowhere at all. Between the nerfed dragonborn and the annoying companions it's not looking that great even if it did finish.

I'm wanting the What happened chapters to end already. All this should have just been one chapter.

Hint it's bs. Quit nerfing the mc.

This arc needs to end in the next chapter, both the vault junk and Umbridge. You have dragged it out past the point of insanity. It's not doing any good and is dragging this story into the mud. Seriously, it's past time to be done with all of this.

One step closer to being done with all the boring vaults yay.

Or perhaps write something worth actually reading? The constant droning on about nothing is annoying. More meat less potatoes.

At this point I'm just skipping whole chapters to get to something actually interesting.

I wouldn't write a sequel to this. You pretty much ruined the story with the aliens killing everyone.

This novel got ruined when you stuck all the oc reincarnators into the story. Should have just been the mc and that was it.

Why are we following the stations of canon with an add-on?

And unfollowing because of all the bs you keep running your character headlong into.

So what made you jump over here instead of hosting it on ff.net?

If he doesn't kill off Lucius over the summer after this bullshit then this novel is worthless. I mean seriously, you know exactly who your enemy is and know he wants you dead and has made 2 attempts on your life so far. The fact he isn't dead from a knife in the back is retarded.