Just a guy really liking his chinese stories;].
soo edgy,was having hope for this story and it just got brutally murdered.
This is fantastic. really grimdark and not so stupid like reverend insanity. i do hope for solid growth of this story. Hope it will get picked.
thats because he forgot hes not breathing anymore xD.
Fallout power armor.
Pretty interesting -something different among multitude of idiotic check in or pet master novels. Mc is quite smart-atleast for now( it's only 20 chaps atm) and its not reincarnated into a young thrash master too,quite refreshing :D
i do really like this story. yeah it start's with a system-but it is quite fun system start,with some gentle and actually fun humour. Story is not bad(hard to say more after mangy 40 chapters),hope it will stay solid. and 1 more important thing-this is not another crappy pet story.
This is a really unique story. Writing is so bad and wooden that i wonder if they made AI wrote it. "The Humour" is forced beyond belief,story is full of holes,author does not bother checking things-and it seems like his overall knowledge is very shallow. MC is portrayed as a cool,tough guy,but with author skill comes out like a brain impaired idiot. Complete and utter waste of time.
Gunpowder in grenades? Maybe in 19 century. Author certainly don't bother researching anything for his story,it's full of things that don't make sense.
This is very good. great MC,really interesting story and a good atmosphere. There some humour,luckily not of the prevalent primitive face slap type. Hope it will get picked up,theres not enough stories like this.
fun and pretty unique,i ve enjoyed these few chapter's . hope it will get picked,but propably it will be another crippled young master bullshit story.
Battle Mage Mc always have cool skill that let him win with warriors in close combat . First and most important is Plot Armor. Second is that logic don't work if it comes to Mc-especially if he is battlemage. He hits harder than typical warrior,dodges everything so no need for hit points and have more mana than typical Mage. Marysue characters in everything ive read with Battlemage.