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LausDeo

LausDeo

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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1mth
    Commented

    give the man a purple lightsaber

    "Tatiana promised me a lightsaber if I helped her land a hit on you."- I think that was the time when I promised her an individual speed-ship if she landed a hit on me, a type of spaceship for one pilot and no passengers, fully focused on speed.
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    Dragon in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · ExistentialVoid
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo4mth
    Commented

    if it si Leah please save her author-san

    "Spider…Man…"
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    Ultimate Marvel System
    Anime & Comics · Imbreak
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo6mth
    Replied to AnAmericanBoy

    wrong, he is 14 or 15

    (AN: SOME *** STUFF!)
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    Reborn as Batman's Little Brother
    Anime & Comics · Imbreak
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo10mth
    Commented

    don't like it, looks like metroman from megamind

    And as the dust fell down. Everybody saw that the bank robbers were unconscious on the floor, and in the middle of it all, stood a tall, handsome man in his white and gold superman suit almost looking holy.
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    The Marvelous Superman
    Others · Passerby_Venne
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo11mth
    Replied to Furytailedfox

    and annoying

    "Is simple. Derek here will lose control of the car and fall on the water and the two of you will die in this accident." The voice says "I can say that is... poetic justice."
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    Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1yr
    Commented

    mature

    Also, just a question. Is it fine to write something in the future regarding MC and Loli Death seggs scene or wait till Death has a more adult body? Though I say loli, she's not the flat kid type but more like Rory Mercury or Shuten Douji sexy LEGAL loli XD. Just asking in case people start complaining about it when I end up doing it :P
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    Ultimate Marvel System
    Anime & Comics · Imbreak
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1yr
    Commented

    autocorrector issues?

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    In the movie worlds with my system
    Movies · lucifer_112
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1yr
    Commented

    great chapter and the extra of hector and wanda is simple marvelous

    Ch 50 Another Day Of A Main Character in Marvel
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    Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1yr
    Commented

    sorry man, this is as far as I can go. was interesting at the beginning but now for ME (just in case an a..hole wants to give his/her unwanted reply to my opinion) this story became boring AF (the slow pace and the constant intromision of the JL without the mc doing nothing). I'm dropping it

    Ch 259 An Unbeatable Foe?
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    Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
    TV · Saintbarbido
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1yr
    Commented

    hey dude, FYI Fanny is a girl's name

    Fanny was not originally from this world. He didn't know how or why he came to this world; all he knew was that he suddenly became a baby who could only cry when he opened his eyes.
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    Marvel Anime Extraction
    Anime & Comics · nyawdao2
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1yr
    Commented

    smallones

    Ch 12 Just a question(Important)
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    Marvel; My wife is Hela; Goddess of Death, Just Saiyan
    Anime & Comics · Elliot_Jackson
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1yr
    Commented

    yessssss

    (A.N.: So, I read some people talk about how they forget the plot. So I have this idea of a recap. Should I continue or nah?)
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    Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1yr
    Commented

    hahahaha good one

    "Martha…?"
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    Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1yr
    Commented

    sorry but i'll dropped. just my opinion but i hate all that building that fight to be in nothing. it feels like the post credit scene of spiderman homecoming

    Ch 94 CHAPTER 93
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1yr
    Commented

    *ira

    Spiderman asiente seriamente calmando un poco su irá .
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    Álex Wayne llega a Marvel
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1yr
    Replied to Jonathan_Lam_2034

    me too

    Ch 13 CHAPTER 12
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1yr
    Commented

    this chapter was a total load of BS. sometimes less is more.

    Ch 12 CHAPTER 11
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
    Movies · Draul_TheOminous
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1yr
    Commented

    well deserved insults by the way

    An finally, our MC is growing up(God the insults I've received because of this). I still don't know why people say he's being naive, because he isn't. Just because someone was kidnapped doesn't mean he'll have the whole 'none shall fuck with me' vibe. I'll know since I've been kidnapped once and yet you don't see me hitting the gym everyday or buying firearms to work on my proficiency with, nor am I going full Rambo with self defense training. Him getting kidnapped and experimented on was a good way to kill his naivete but I wanted something more, something that went against who he was and the result was this.
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    MARVEL: RE-DO
    Movies · Draul_TheOminous
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1yr
    Commented

    360 quiere decir que volvió al principio deberia ser 180

    Eso solo cayo a rumi solo llego apenas un dia y su vida ya estaba dando un vuelco de 360 grados.
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    esto no es marvel
    Anime & Comics · wolfate
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  • LausDeo
    LausDeo1yr
    Commented

    that made my day [img=recommend]

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    THE GÀMER : IN THE MULTIVERSE ( AU )
    Anime & Comics · Xuefang1
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