You're welcome bro! and thanks for the feedback here, will make sure to improve for the next scene ^^

Thanks for the correction

This can be construed as Long Sha wanting to provoke him by his actions of do nothing ad can be said abandoning him as a sacrifice to kill Ye Feng. Earlier, Axl already reported to Long Sha about Long Tao's reckless actions, but in the end, they still sent someone and decided to kill, even if they were not Ye Feng

Moretti's later will be introduced in later chapter ^^

I apologize, this is supposed to be the previous version after editing. I have already contacted the Webnovel editor and tech support, and they informed me that my account database was not synced and needs time to be restored. I am now waiting for their response before I can upload a new chapter. Thank you in advance

thank you for the reminder. will improve it in the next chapter

You are right. This one was inspired by that novel, but it's only the first plot since I thought it was suitable as the opening for my novel. :)

Yes, This is basically different story, it was a short novel. I want to remake Villain Darket Side but got an obstacle from Webnovel Editor. Still waiting for their approval so I can use Villain Darker Side so basically I will use this link to create a short novel to passed the time

https://www.webnovel.com/book/what-lies-beyond-the-tree_26114584506312105

yep from your reading history the book you are comment either Pokemon, Naruto, all anime. Case closed. you are undeage kid. bye

Alright I get it, either you are an otaku who can't handle critiques or an underage kid who still suck momma tits. Case solved.

I like Pokemon novel and I read many Pokemon novel. For me this is new. The way author justified why Eeevee evolution still in this novel still not discovered, initially I had a doubt regarding it. But to my surprised Author explain it splendidly in a scientific way! If you want to read a pokemon fanfic that not just full of battle but also research, scientific terms like DNA, mRNA thinks like that, I recommended this novel

How? I already read it until chapter 30, the way it explain Eeveelution, evolution stone, it basically new for me personally. At least from any Pokemon fanfic I read, I never read novel that say they still not found Eevee evolution. This is the most interesting, how can he explained in the modern world Eeveelution still not discovered? but author simply explained it in scientific way

I am a Pokemon fan and I never read any Pokemon novel that explain Pokemon in any scientific way othet than this novel. At least until you read chapter 30, you will know why I said in scientific way. I am enjoyed it a lot, it will be different

I like romance!. Everyone has their own different personality and their motivations. This was overall a well written story. I like how the dialogue too it was not awkward with the structure by structure. Good job author

Everyone has their own different personality and their motivations are implied with a proper flow in the writing. This was overall a well written story. Keep it up Author san

Everyone has their own different personality and their motivations are implied with a proper flow in the writing. This was overall a well written story. The characters have depth. Nice story.... But l like the author's writting skill more.... Keep going author.... Its an very good one that l'll recommend everyone to read....

I apologize for the confusion. It supposed to be Sierra Falken

when I saw chapter 2 and 3 I thought of kingdom building games instantly hahaha. I love kingdom building games. I have hope expectation with this! the chapter one hooked me. but I hope he can take revenge on his fiancee who accused him[img=Your move]

This is nice, I only ready just 3 chapters but got captivated, but it is pretty good. the novel is progressing at a decent pace too, and the story so far is interesting, Ilike the dark side.. i will look forward to how this progresses. Keep it up author