i think i gonna re read 1st book before but I'm hyped

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

scam !

cant wait

good job

yea its fine for the story since its just an example anyways it just feld wrong reading it

the caner thing i get it but its also very wrong first cancer is not sth that sleeps inside you and then awakes most people have it at somepoit in their live but the imune System just handles it and kills it before its a problem most of the time second i mean you cant evolve in a way that cancer is no longer possible maybe but its not that easy i mean cancer is just the negative result of not usefull mutation or evolution you cant hit on everything so saying what is said in the novel is basicly saying people evolved into sth that cant evolve anymore ?!

this is not really important for the context of the Story but may not be intensional the German Name i asume u mean the name Walter Bäcker means Walter the baker ( baker by trade ) its just how some last names came to be by trade not sure if this was intesnsional just so you know if you didnt

keep up the good work with some novels there is so many chapters each week to the point where the chapters are just empty Collections of meanigless words without any emotion and you only continue reading for the sake of reading with this novel most of the time after i read a Chapter i feel more invested in the storry then before.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

happens :)

the ring is 5m x 5m = 5^2 x m^2 = 25m^2 like previusly discribed maybe you should change one of the two and make it 5m^2 is the first place or change this chapter to 25m^2