Excellent writing!! I find the writing style very soothing and relaxing which makes sentences like "Oh dear god, Is my father Houdini?" very humorous to me. It doesn't have a lot of action so far other than training but it is still an enjoyable read. I look forward to how the plot will develop in the future.

2nd time through - great writing!!!

I really enjoyed reading this work. I loved the humor found in the portrayal of the Senju Family. Excellent writing!

I can't stop giggling over "budget Byakugan" - very witty writing!

I have really enjoyed reading this work and I am looking forward to your updates! The main character is OP but the way it is handled in the writing keeps a serious tone. A lot of writers when developing an OP character lose me as a reader because it just becomes too ridiculous - it loses its "serious tone". I am a reader not a writer so I am sure there is a better way to "say what I mean". If you like OP characters, give this work a chance and read it!

Excellent writing! I could not stop reading it (had to binge read). Thank you for writing and allowing others to read your work!

Excellent writing! I love the direction of the plot so far - I hope you continue with this work. Write for those of us who love the story "as is"! To me, a writer loses their creativity and control of their work when they try to fix what the negative comments say is wrong i.e. writing for those who want to change it. I hope I didn't "overstep" in my comments but I noticed low ratings that I didn't understand the "why". All online writers have my utmost respect because they have the courage to write and let the world read it!!

I thought the crypt scene was perfectly okay. I think a descriptive journey through to her tomb would only be necessary if elements introduced were needed for plot development. Excellent writing! Please update soon if possible!

Excellent writing!!

I have not checked this novel since last year and was so excited to see updates. This novel is one of my favorite "second chance apocalypse novels". I really hope to see more updates. The writing and plot are excellent!

Love the plot so far and am looking forward to your updated! Hmmm, for some reason there is no where to vote or I would have thrown you some stones. Keep up the good work!

I need help understanding - Is the prologue "the end result" of some action and starting with chapter 1 it tells the story of how it happened? Great story - I enjoyed reading so far-