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shashumga

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  • shashumga
    shashumga8mth
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    I don't like how this story is developing. The premise of the story should focus on strengthening and solving the mystery around Nak, but instead, we are getting too much romance. It feels like the author is trying to mix romance, sci-fi, mana, and mystery, but they have added an excessive amount of romance, making the whole story tasteless.

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    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • shashumga
    shashumga1yr
    Commented

    Did your mom not teach you to not accept gifts from strangers?

    The Chu family had many such low-grade spirit artifacts of similar grade. They were all gifts given to the Chu family after completing transactions with Black Moon Tower!
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    I Stayed At Home For A Century, When I Emerged I Was Invincible
    Eastern · Halfway Breeze
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  • shashumga
    shashumga1yr
    Posted

    'Fearsome Beasts rampaged everywhere and the lives of mankind were threatened.' I thought main character was going to fight with beasts in order to survive and eat them to get stronger. But author really ruined whole book by making it just clout chasing/face slapping main character. I still preserved and kept going for more thinking even if it's face slapping it's still the novel I was looking for this whole time but chapters are filled with illogical and needless face slapping/clout chasing I can't ignore so I can't keep going.

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    Awakening The Gluttony Talent: I Become Stronger By Eating
    Urban · I Don't Eat Takeout
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  • shashumga
    shashumga1yr
    Posted

    Lack of imagination leads to shallow writing quality and the author only cares about word count. The only good thing about this work is how easily it makes you sleep.

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    Master Of Martial Arts Has An Advanced Optical Brain
    Sci-fi · Eight O'clock At Night
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  • shashumga
    shashumga1yr
    Posted

    I've read up to chapter 70 but story is quite boring. Some of the character's feelings develops rather unreasonably, lack of mc figure, most of the chapters are development or fights of the side characters. Main character is seeking 'invincibility' but he is not even training, most of his time is spent on side characters. I'm going to keep reading a hundred more chapters but I don't think it's going to change anything.

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    A Demon's Journey
    Eastern · Evil_Dragon
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  • shashumga
    shashumga1yr
    Posted

    Pros: - Book has moderate amount of chapters (Around 450-500) - Has good ending - No harem - Multiple Worlds - Repetitive but not boring because it has moderate amount of chapters - There are no annoying clans/sects/young masters - Author could drag but didn't and cut to chase to make story reasonable. Cons: - Fights are kinda lackluster - Comments of random side characters becomes repetitive

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    Global Reincarnation: Becoming A God With My Unlimited Revive
    Fantasy · One Punch Cute King
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  • shashumga
    shashumga2yr
    Commented

    Well that's why military ranks exists. If general dies someone else can replace their position. Another 2 IQ cultivation novel.

    "How do you all not know this? Three years ago, this Brother Kong went to the Huailin region to cultivate. On the way, he suddenly encountered a chaotic war. To protect the citizens who were escaping, he breached the army of the rebels alone, wielding a Tiger-headed Gold-chiseled Spear. He directly took the army general's head, causing chaos in the army, and bought time for the people to escape. After the incident, he received the title of Army Breaking Spear."
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    I Just Won't Play By The Book
    Eastern · 7 Percent
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  • shashumga
    shashumga2yr
    Replied to The_Weird_Magician

    ends at chapter 239

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    Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills
    Sci-fi · 8k Dollar
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  • shashumga
    shashumga2yr
    Replied to blacki

    But half of the salary of an average person.

    "Twenty-five hundred Dragon Country bills a month. It's a little expensive, but I can't be bothered to look for another place."
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    Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills
    Sci-fi · 8k Dollar
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  • shashumga
    shashumga2yr
    Posted

    PROS: - Interactions with characters, - MC's personality changing slightly over the time, - Different take on dungeons, - Story progresses with stable pace. CONS: I couldn't find anything to nitpick, solid work.

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    Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills
    Sci-fi · 8k Dollar
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  • shashumga
    shashumga2yr
    Replied to Disgusting_4269

    You sound like paid commentator when you're desperately trying to make excuses for blatant xenophobia and racism.

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    Zero To Hero In The Martial Arts Library
    Eastern · Flammable Wood
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  • shashumga
    shashumga2yr
    Posted

    Zero to hero? More like zero to infinite propaganda. Every character started to say 'outside nine provinces everyone is barbarian', like dude calm down why do you hate other countries so much and you're writing something like that in a book? If this book was written in another country I'm pretty sure that author would be banned for racism and xenophobia. Probably someone tried to machine translate and edit it with notepad's 'find and replace' but forgot to replace some words so every now and then realms and everything starts to become confusing. MC's character is really awful as well, literally beats 7 year old little girl and amputees her so he can test his abilities on her. If you're into dark/evil mc then it's alright but then he starts saving random people.

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    Zero To Hero In The Martial Arts Library
    Eastern · Flammable Wood
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  • shashumga
    shashumga2yr
    Commented

    When you don't even bother to edit MTL. Classic webnovel translation quality.

    "As expected of a core disciple of the Immortal Destiny Holy Land. His strength is indeed not to be underestimated!" Elder Mo Ying looked at Xu Qiuya and said.
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    Sign In Ten Years, Then I Am Exposed By My Gorgeous Senior
    Eastern · Ji Muhan
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  • shashumga
    shashumga3yr
    Posted

    There is nothing to say, it's amazing. I've been reading light novels for 4-5 years now, whenever someone asked me 'what's your favorite novel?' I'd name 5+ novels but after reading this novel I can say this is my favorite novel.

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    Birth of the Demonic Sword
    Eastern · Eveofchaos
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