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Rouwhorstn

Rouwhorstn

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2017-12-05 JoinedGlobal
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn1yr
    Commented

    What’s the point of including this? It just dis reacted fro the story and draws itnoutm

    Ch 4689 Giorno's Ridebashers
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn1yr
    Posted

    Story is well written and is event overall. My biggest complaint would be that the story jumps arounds too much. Thought I think this is the author just being inexperienced. Or maybe there’s a grand plan that just couldn’t be connected fast enough. I dont like how the story painted a terrible situation due to being powerless & then just ingores it like. The kid gets beat up on a regular basis so why doesn’t it warp his character?

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    Blood Assimilation
    Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn1yr
    Posted

    Story is good and is sent up to really develop in the future, however I’m 35 chaps in and the mc isn’t using his reincarnated advantages. Like I get that he’s 5 yr old but he should be trying to do more. ie read, sign contracts, etc

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    Guardian Of The End
    Fantasy · BlackFlamer
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn1yr
    Commented

    Yeah this is starting to get boring. The MC is to OP and is kinda stupid on his approch. He wasted months of time doing nothing and now just is doinngg go quests? Where’ s his drive or ambition.

    Ch 51 Ten Bulls and One Tiger III
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    The First King of Beasts
    Fantasy · Killix_Kreed
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn1yr
    Commented

    Getting tired of this dogeun arc. It feels like he’s been diving for like 80ish chapters.

    Ch 174 Visualisation
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    My Necromancer Class
    Fantasy · Aero182
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn1yr
    Posted

    Very slow speed and characters are very 1 demensional. Author is witty, which is great but the story doesn’t progress. The world building sucks. The setting is the middle of a galactic war in the future, which isn’t congruent with what the MC experiences. He experiences a bunch of cliches from bullying which isnt congruent with the seriousness of a war.

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    The Great Genetic Era
    Eastern · Pig Sanbu
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn2yr
    Commented

    Not sure if your changing your writing style or just trying to meet a daily quota but I don’t like how you’ve slowed down the novel. Scenes tend to stretch over multiple chaps and it feels like a lot more fluff is being added… can you go back to the old style?

    Ch 544 Lilith vs Shangguan Bing Xue (Part 1)
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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn2yr
    Posted

    Honestly a bit disappointed with this novel. its pretty good without grammer error and such… but its way to slow paced. I’m nearly 100 chaps in and the mc doesnt have and real necomany skills or something that would tie to the stars. Which isnt what i expected when reading the title, intro, or even the first few chaps. the MCs just a martial artist with some unque aspects.

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    Starlight Necromancer
    Fantasy · DiceVR
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn2yr
    Posted

    Great story and even better kingdom/world building. I love how detailed the story gets when it comes to building and the pace is perfect. the mc isn’t OP so it much more realistic. Unfortunatey that also means there’s nothing unique about the MC - no intro of advanced tech, no cleverness - and as a result makes the story monotonous after a while.

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    Viscount's Rise
    History · Darkwood
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn2yr
    Replied to Snoring_Panda

    Very much a slice of life novel Up to chap 90…. is that going to change? Mc has no direction at all and doesnt even seem to be concerned with getting energy

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    Reincarnated as an Energy with a System
    Eastern · Snoring_Panda
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn2yr
    Commented

    Can you stop doing this?

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    Legacy of the Dark Sage
    Fantasy · Lessyr
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn2yr
    Commented

    At the rate were going we are going to hit 100K cHapter before zather advances lol

    Ch 3127 Crystal Potential
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn2yr
    Replied to smgo27911

    Yeah your probably right.

    Ch 3102 The First Completion
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn2yr
    Replied to Zeebie

    100% agree with you.

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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn2yr
    Replied to Santachi

    I don’t think so, they’re cute at times but more often than not she doesnt respect him. and ves always has to give in

    Ch 3097 The Right Choice
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn2yr
    Commented

    Finally a shop thats more realistic and won’t protect the owner!

    Ch 12 Miserable Thrashing
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    Magic Shop System
    Fantasy · Eternal_Demon
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn2yr
    Replied to Krizantem

    That was 11 months ago what heppened?

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    Supreme Lord Shapeshifter
    Fantasy · Krizantem
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn2yr
    Posted

    Traslation kinda sucks, but still readable. Though it’s very repetitive without real progress.All he is collect resources without doing anything with them.

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    Digging to Survive: I Can See Hints
    Sci-fi · Sword Old Wolf
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  • Rouwhorstn
    Rouwhorstn2yr
    Commented

    Can you stop repeating the title and author in here? This just makes it cost more Spirit stones and me think you just want to scam us. I should be able to find this info if i look at the story details.

    Chapter 108 Information about the Black organization
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    Rise My Elementals!
    Fantasy · M_W
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