DessertWorm
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DessertWorm15hCommentedThe rat's eyes widened, and it went on its hind legs as it slowly retreated. "Calm down, Nick. I'm not going to hurt you," it said with a nervous smile as it stopped retreating. "Look at me. I'm just a rat. How am I supposed to hurt someone that managed to get through the Zephyx Extractor Exam?"- DessertWorm4mthCommented
He ALMOST made it…
With a mere thought, Xu Jingming became akin to a colossal magnet, continuously drawing in the essence of life from myriad parallel realms. Life essence flowed into him incessantly, until it was fully absorbed, and in that moment, Xu Jingming felt a sense of perfection and detachment. - DessertWorm4mthCommented
*sound effect of someone getting beamed up, very scifi sound*
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Cant forget the lobby. B2-B1-L-2-3-4-5-6
An old, decrepit apartment building, visible even from a distance – his place was on the eighth floor. (TL: Ninth floor for all of you North American readers) - DessertWorm4mthCommented
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Perception: 69 - DessertWorm4mthCommented
Caffiene will get Cleansed.
Yu Jin-Ho looked a bit crestfallen for some reason as he sat back down. - DessertWorm4mthReplied to Adamaximus
It’s not a very helpful system.
Tiredness: 3 - DessertWorm4mthCommented
The dog-like monster let out several pathetic whimpers.
*SFX for a dog-type whimpering, repeated* - DessertWorm4mthCommented
*He could hear the sand parting as the Giant Centipede came closer* Sound effects are for comics, and movie scripts, books use discription and reader’s imagination.
*SFX for sand parting ways* - DessertWorm4mthCommented
Uh oh! What were those laws again?
"God d*mn it! I can't stand this!" - DessertWorm4mthCommented"Oh, that is an interesting thing. It's a form of laser sword with a self stabilizing beam containment field that's like nothing I've seen before. We've got plenty of laser swords and laser torches, but this is pretty cool." She informed them, while the shopkeeper came over to talk to them.
- DessertWorm6mthCommented"Nothing. As it turned out, staring at the moon for too long can lead to some very, very dire consequences. After many casualties among the researchers, the LO program was discontinued, and the observatories were sealed. I would advise you not to look at the moon too closely, young man… actually, it's better not to think about it at all."
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Don’t you know who my father is? Sunny’s response
"I suggest you unhand me, friend… what do you want?" - DessertWorm6mthCommented
The flag has been lowered.
To Sunny's absolute shock… nothing really happened for the rest of the night. There was no deadly brawl that forced the cohort to intervene, no emissary of the great clans arrived to crash the party, no Gate opened right in front of the club. He had been fully prepared for something to go terribly wrong, but in the end, nothing did. - DessertWorm6mthCommented
“The Flag” has been raised!
"Are you kidding me?! Did you have to say that out loud?!" - DessertWorm6mthCommentedWhat was more… Effie had been the one who chose and bought the clothes for the two of them to wear today. As the result, Nephis was wearing a vibrant red dress that barely reached the middle of her thigh, and left her shoulders bare.
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Here the author shows he has an understanding of a good DJ. Managing the crowd and facilitating them to buy more alcohol. Impressivez
The DJ saw how animated the crowd got when the song came on, and kept the vibe going for four more until the crowd started to wear out, then moved to a slower song for everyone to go get a drink and refresh. - DessertWorm6mthCommented"And, it's right next to Wiggles Coffee Shop, so like, everyone is there." One of the Innu agreed.