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I like cunning MCs and when they finally unleash their true strength.
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Nah, it's too big of a stretch. It's a very very small possibility. He needs to have somehow do what no one has done before except the avatar, master another element. Then he needs to have another face. Then he needs to go from being an enemy of the fire nation to one of their war heroes. It's a big stretch a very big one.
Ridiculous and outright wrong. But I can see why he'd think that.
I think it was based on the aspect of perfection. Azula was a perfectionist to the highest degree and her flame became blue because of it.
Well written, Good job, some people have no appreciation for these things, don't mind them.
The Valar. Valar is a title not a name.
I don't know about that, he was quite attracted to her...
Personally I don't think incorporating animals in the sword style is the right choice. As what do animals know of how to wield a sword. Could do something more nature-ish if you want. Like rushing-river style or Flowing-wind style or something alike. If you want something more grounded then perhaps just Numenorian style would fit. Make it not to obvious at the start, i.e. don't make people notice how his style is so reminiscent of the old Edain, until later of course. When his skill further along.
I think that having the name being a bit fantastical would give it the proper weight. Others seem to like the idea of doing a Demon Slayer style. We could do that, I recommend "Sword style of the Sun", as it was the Sun that awakened the first Men. It could be extra damaging and demoralizing against all creatures of evil. Awakening hope in all good who see it, especially during the darkest moments. I think it'd be rather fitting.
Worded a bit wrong, she did not seek to strengthen Sauron. I don't remember the specifics but I believe she was deceived by Celebrimbor.
Fishing... really? We aren't talking about fishing here. Fishing and hunting deer or birds (with a gun I presume) is not the same as charging an apex predator(bear) and chopping it's head off with a sword, getting splattered with it's blood. And just cause one has killed an animal doesn't mean one is brave. A ridiculous notion. It's easy to grab some fishing gear and go fishing. It doesn't make you brave, nor does shooting an animal. Talk to me when you have fought a bear with a sword.
Not weak minded just unused to it. It's a normal human reaction to be unsettled when killing for the first time. And killing an animal up close with a sword or a knife is far more uncomfortable than with a gun. Doing it with a gun from far away is much easier. I doubt you charged a bear and killed it with a sword. In fact I doubt you have killed anything, anyone that has actually killed anything would know that doing so unsettles most people. And what idiot would give a ten year old a gun. You sound like you're full of it.
This is from demon slayer, Sun Breath Style.
Man.... why... why did you write that, I had to check cause of that.
What I think the author is trying to say is that he has no limit. He can develop infinitely. In everything. Everyone has a limit, a human limit, our MC doesn't.
It's a bit unreal how our 11 year old protag is overwhelming one of the greatest wizards of his time. Dumbledore I know wouldn't let our 11 year old, i repeat 11 year old child, reduce him into a beaten, ashamed, poor little pitiful thing. It's just not clicking for me.
Ain't he 9.... Bruh