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I like cunning MCs and when they finally unleash their true strength.
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I am sorry, the length of her hair is the same as what???
How the hell does that make sense?
Himself?
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Should be nii-san here. Nee-san is female.
I'm assuming "flame" is Hiro.
Smart, the best lies are the ones hidden with truth. Showing his real reaction and letting the future patriarch make his own conclusions and going along with them is better than trying to fake his expression. He'd risk being seen as a liar and seem to perhaps be hiding something. As our protagonist is no master actor, showing his genuine reaction is the right move.
Decades???
Nah, it's too big of a stretch. It's a very very small possibility. He needs to have somehow do what no one has done before except the avatar, master another element. Then he needs to have another face. Then he needs to go from being an enemy of the fire nation to one of their war heroes. It's a big stretch a very big one.
Ridiculous and outright wrong. But I can see why he'd think that.
I think it was based on the aspect of perfection. Azula was a perfectionist to the highest degree and her flame became blue because of it.
Well written, Good job, some people have no appreciation for these things, don't mind them.
The Valar. Valar is a title not a name.
I don't know about that, he was quite attracted to her...
Personally I don't think incorporating animals in the sword style is the right choice. As what do animals know of how to wield a sword. Could do something more nature-ish if you want. Like rushing-river style or Flowing-wind style or something alike. If you want something more grounded then perhaps just Numenorian style would fit. Make it not to obvious at the start, i.e. don't make people notice how his style is so reminiscent of the old Edain, until later of course. When his skill further along.
I think that having the name being a bit fantastical would give it the proper weight. Others seem to like the idea of doing a Demon Slayer style. We could do that, I recommend "Sword style of the Sun", as it was the Sun that awakened the first Men. It could be extra damaging and demoralizing against all creatures of evil. Awakening hope in all good who see it, especially during the darkest moments. I think it'd be rather fitting.
Worded a bit wrong, she did not seek to strengthen Sauron. I don't remember the specifics but I believe she was deceived by Celebrimbor.