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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce11mth
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    are they werewolves or shapeshifters?! please make up your mind! those are two different creatures

    "Why are you apologizing for the sins of your people? We know your people are known for their shapeshifting ability, and this man killed the real servant and took his face to try and kill the Royal Consort. This is just one of their underhanded ways to try and undermine me as always," Rowena said in a cold, seething tone as a deathly searing aura descended in the entire room, making Asher feel as if his surroundings had turned into a scorching hell.
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    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce11mth
    Replied to SIDUZ

    what's the GIF from?

    New Eden boasted a class system with unlimited possibilities, as one could mix and match skills from all the trees, as long as they had the skill points to learn them and form their own class.
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    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    Games · Galanar
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce11mth
    Replied to Adamo_Amet

    still doesn't clear things up. the boy was in total isolation in the cell. I thought at first that he died and Alexander took over but now it seems like Alexander is an alternate personality

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    Murim: Struggle of the Weak
    Eastern · Adamo_Amet
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    illusoryforce1yr
    Commented

    See I've been so confused since the end of the prologue. was the boy stealing from people and teaching the orphan girl math Alexander this whole time? there wasn't a confirmation to this and it seemed like we were reading an entirely different character

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    Murim: Struggle of the Weak
    Eastern · Adamo_Amet
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce1yr
    Commented

    Huh? what's the point?

    For his lungs, Lloyd had given him hardened gourd bottles to break through, using only the strength in his exhale. Each bottle was bigger than the next, and it took him an entire month to break the first one.
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    Born in Blood
    Fantasy · CovidCandy
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    illusoryforce1yr
    Commented

    what a head scratcher this opponent is gonna be

    Ch 1676 13th Generation Heir Of The Iron Pillar Mane Clan!
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    Walker Of The Worlds
    Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce1yr
    Replied to Demons_and_I

    the novel has a lot of potential and I'm liking it so far. to make it better, I think having someone edit your work will help with the flow cuz some errors are popping up every now and then. Also some of the transitions to third person POV when giving background info on the other characters seems a bit random. I suggest taking your time hashing out details in the story that paint a more descriptive story than having frequent power trips. Show more struggling in this survival type world in not just battles but also in other stuff like scrounging up food, water, shelter, weapons, etc. It's fine that the system gives them reward for weapons but I also think it happens convienently. instead they should display intellect in using resources available to them. personally, if the system shop was ONLY for buying information and not essentials like HP and MP potions it would better as it forces the characters to be careful, plan, and improvise. plus it would make more sense to work together strategically in a group than this whole in-group fighting that seems unnecessary. if I was the mc, I just wouldn't deal with all of the drama cuz it means no one can be trusted even a little bit to have my back in a fight. that's very dangerous. might as well go solo. sorry for the long message. I do like your work though. it reminds me of outside of time a little bit and it could be just as good

    To make things even more dramatic, he also made sure the {Crimson Bear} got a few nasty hits on him.
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    God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.
    Action · Demons_and_I
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce1yr
    Replied to Demons_and_I

    the ape was rated as deadly vs the crimson demon bear that was rated as special. that shows it's already stronger and so it makes no sense to be so cautious like that

    It had previously been eyeing the {Crimson Demon Bear}, intending on fighting it, then devouring it. If it had managed to do that, it would be many times more powerful than it was right now, and Cain wouldn't even stand a chance.
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    God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.
    Action · Demons_and_I
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce1yr
    Commented

    this part needs work. the are is strong enough already. it could have killed the bear. clarification is needed

    It had previously been eyeing the {Crimson Demon Bear}, intending on fighting it, then devouring it. If it had managed to do that, it would be many times more powerful than it was right now, and Cain wouldn't even stand a chance.
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    God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.
    Action · Demons_and_I
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce1yr
    Commented

    drinking one potion per second? sounds wasteful and again unrealistic. I doubt the enemy would give home time to drink it if the ape is that fast

    To maintain his steady consumption of mana, he was constantly drinking vial after vial of mana regen potions. He had stockpiled a lot of mana potions, but they were being consumed very fast. He was drinking one potion per second.
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    God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.
    Action · Demons_and_I
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce1yr
    Commented

    This is honestly an unreasonable thing to do in a fight where your opponent is your equal or better. fights are unpredictable and stuff like this can get you killed. especially if you're ambushed

    To make things even more dramatic, he also made sure the {Crimson Bear} got a few nasty hits on him.
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    God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.
    Action · Demons_and_I
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce1yr
    Commented

    thank you!!!

    Ch 135 Newbie Goes Out to Sea
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    Outside Of Time
    Eastern · Er Gen
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce1yr
    Commented

    lol love this dude!!!

    Xu Qing thought about it and shifted his gaze to look into Zhang San's eyes.
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    Outside Of Time
    Eastern · Er Gen
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce1yr
    Replied to Viriti

    Primal Hunter on Royal Road

    ARCHER
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    Virtual World: Rise of the Sword Saint
    Action · Plagiarist_Astre
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce1yr
    Commented

    He's twelve now? it's only been a year and some time no? at most 2 years

    Of course, Yaan would be unable to win such a high level competition at his young age and entry level cultivation, but the sheer fact that a 12 year old child could compete at all would be a massive shock to the other factions. Plus, it would also boost Great Elder Wan's status even further within the sect.
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    A Desolate Life
    Fantasy · SpicyDaoist
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce1yr
    Commented

    Is he at the immortal realm of the body or at the peak of immortal ascension?

    Ch 1313 Opportunity For the Juniors
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    Walker Of The Worlds
    Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce1yr
    Commented

    Meng Hao would be proud 👏 Milk them dry!!!!

    Ch 1041 Sin of Pride
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    Dimensional Descent
    Fantasy · Awespec
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce1yr
    Commented

    Love you too bro! We're best buds!

    [Just one more chapter coming today, love you all <3]
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    Dimensional Descent
    Fantasy · Awespec
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce1yr
    Commented

    I would love it if he cultivated to the peak of the fate ring realm with nine rings before undergoing tribulation. His foundation would be incomparable. He would probably have to explore the God's mainland to achieve that though

    Ch 1755 Red Lotus Karmic Fire
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    Eternal Sacred King
    Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
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  • illusoryforce
    illusoryforce1yr
    Commented
    "Eliminate." The skeleton spoke.
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    Walker Of The Worlds
    Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
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