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Totemic

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  • Totemic
    Totemic2yr
    Replied to Ray_Figueroa

    I'm guessing he thinks it would take away alot of gaming time lol.

    As for how Wei Ge would subdue Shen Yuchi and the bureau, Zhou Wen didn't wish to know. Even if Wei Ge didn't succeed, Zhou Wen already had the strength necessary to destroy the bureau at any time.
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    Let Me Game in Peace
    Urban · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Totemic
    Totemic2yr
    Replied to Crycks

    I meant easy to read and understand from a grammar viewpoint not a plot viewpoint. I understand though the confusion regarding the start of the novel since it was chaotic but from my understanding that was what the author was going for.

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    I Reject Quests
    Urban · FreshMelon
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  • Totemic
    Totemic2yr
    Replied to Totemic

    And to all those who wondered there is only 149 chapters to the actual story counting the prologue but there are a few info chapters in the beginning that state the power system and stuff so I was also counting those

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    I Reject Quests
    Urban · FreshMelon
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  • Totemic
    Totemic2yr
    Posted

    Latest chapter read (153) So far this is a complex novel with an equally complex MC. So if you like a simple MC and a straight forward plot this is not the novel for you. Although there is usually 1 or 2 grammar mistakes per chapter the novel itself is easy to read and understand. As for story development even though the author repeatedly stresses that the story is progressing slowly. From a reader's viewpoint the story is instead progressing very rapidly with different event occuring usually without sufficient build up. And due to the quick pacing several plot holes and inconsistencies occur. In terms of character design I feel as though the author has done a very good job in making a complex and mildly intelligent character with several personality issues. Skipping over update stability I feel as though the most glaring issue in the novel is it's World Background/ World development. This issue is mainly due to two reasons the stories pacing and the addition of other world too early in the story. First of all since the novel is only 153 chapters long at this point the 2nd issue I feel can easily be fixed as the story progress. However, the first issue namely the quick story pacing causes all three worlds to feel more like a PowerPoint slide than an actual world. Now by pacing (to make it clear) I am not criticizing the stories plot. I personally believe the plot is alright. What I am criticizing is how quickly the MC goes from one plot point to another with out sufficient build up to said event. The best example of this is how the MC went to fight the blood gang although the plot was sound, the lack of background of where the MC is, the history of the area ,why the blood gang was even in the area, and how the MC even knows the existence of the tribal area cause the entire scene to be a bit chaotic and confusing. Hopefully as the story continues the author is able to fix most of the issues of the story.

    altalt
    I Reject Quests
    Urban · FreshMelon
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  • Totemic
    Totemic2yr
    Commented

    I wonder what happened to their guns?

    Ch 144 Vs Runic Arms Squad And Metal Squad (Part 9)
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    I Reject Quests
    Urban · FreshMelon
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  • Totemic
    Totemic2yr
    Replied to Wiseman_

    I am guessing they mean creatures of the mysterious rank like the time carp and the yin yang fish. since there is no records as said previously of these high rank creatures turning into sea demons

    Ch 756 I Am A Legend
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    God of Fishing
    Eastern · Pig That Can Howl Like A Wolf
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  • Totemic
    Totemic3yr
    Commented

    boondocks lol

    "You're right," Albion nodded before he calmly stated, "I'm no women beater, but I'll slap a b*tch when I need to."
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    I Am A Notorious Hidden Boss In The Alternate World
    Urban · Pointbreak
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