Lol.

noice.

Pretty good story so far, I enjoy it as much as I like other works of his.

Good Chapter, hope you put that pilot here too. On another note, I do believe Luna is expressing some animalistic traits; are mutation quirks that intertwined with the psyche?

yes!

I'll agree with a majority of people here are saying. pls develop her more, her character is already has the foundations down but her motivations behind her actions needs more work. She would be a good foil to Will as he needs a plus one and what better individual would he be able to get besides the woman he loves that understands him.