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croooked3yrReplied to RachelRuthCh -2 Before He Became The CEO- croooked3yrCommented
The bish has "inter-spatial" storage but claims that mermaids don't exist.Why doesn't this bish just go and kill herself.
With her great-grandmother, Bo Lanfen at hundred-twenty years old, she still acted like she was sixty. Bo Lifen reached for her bracelet hidden underneath her robe's sleeves, flicked one of its beads, and took out the black pearls from the inter-spatial storage. She also took out the bottled hidden spring mountain water and started her preparations. - croooked3yrCommented
I thought it was only with the panda but you even using "them" to refer to Yang Li instead of "him" It makes the story soooo confusing.Please edit.
The creature eyed them, at the sudden lack of viewers as it took the chance to give them a tiny piece of advice, "They won't stop beating a dead horse if it'll still twitch and entertain them. But you don't want to be a dead horse so I suggest you do what's asked. You can try to tilt a bit to the left or to the right—but in the end, you're still going to do the quest at the end." - croooked3yrCommented
Why's the author using only plural pronouns where it should be singular
Truth be told, the Panda was begrudgingly impressed with them thinking loopholes—but they could only do it for so long. - croooked3yrCommented
"them" thinking loopholes. "him" thinking loopholes.
Truth be told, the Panda was begrudgingly impressed with them thinking loopholes—but they could only do it for so long. - croooked3yrCommented
The creature eyed the human and awaited "their" reaction. It should be:The creature ered the human and awaited "his" reaction. I think the author needs help with his usage of pronouns as it makes the story confusing.
"...It's not actually fun when you already know what's happening, but you're on what you first assume to be a 'reality TV show'." The creature eyed the human and awaited their reaction. The man usually had a good head on his shoulders, and so they could already see the man capitalizing on this. - croooked3yrCommented
Not "they" but "it'
"That's some wolf in sheep's clothing if I have ever seen someone." The Panda remarked and plopped on the small dining table that was in between him and the woman. "Are they all a bunch of famed actors or something?" The creature was far too relaxed as they ambled forwards to the steamed buns. The breakfast that was meant for him and Grandma Lanfen's grandchild. "She must actually be sick in seeing your face, heh. Finally a worthy competitor." - croooked3yrReplied to RachelRuth
Instead of using"they".you should use "it" since using they immediately creates confusion of being more than one person. "According to the Webster dictionary (***.webster.com) the pronoun 'it' can be used in reference to "a person or animal whose *** is unknown or disregarded"
They were NOT following the guy there despite the demands. "Damn perverts." The Panda muttered to themselves—and felt a chain of lightning strike them in the back. The creature crashed to the carpeted floor and groaned temporarily. They hated their work. - croooked3yrReplied to CailinMatthews
Better yet,the company whose CEO he is is Qidi-If it were to be the case,I would hope he would fail and his company to collapse
Yang Li sighed and rubbed his forehead. What kind of nonsense was he hearing and reading right now? "I am familiar with the word Cultivation and System but what is this Harem included in it? The System doesn't make any sense and I am a bit surprised that you have not 'transported' me into another world." - croooked3yrCommentedCh 522 Maybe I'll break their two eggs
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Since the start of this novel only one month has passed??
Zhao Yanyan was not even ashamed anymore when she heard vulgar words like this, if this was Zhao Yanyan 1 month ago, maybe he would have been very embarrassed when she heard words like this. - croooked3yrReplied to Wachdog
Maybe if you were living in China..........
After Tianlong Yun entered the training room he left behind an angry and furious Chu Fan who could only clench his fists and his teeth swearing to teach that guy a lesson he would never forget. - croooked3yrCommented
excited and not exited
There was a device to run, a punching bag, bars, weights and a lot of other stuff. Right now he was supper exited almost as excited as when he made love to his lover. - croooked3yrReplied to Pokoj11
Its not bad when your friend is a fatty,being fat is a sign of loyalty of the friend.
But now he remembered that they had been in same elementary school and both were 'friends' for some time. - croooked3yrCommented
Lol,thats too few,he should at least have 30 million+ harem :3
As for the thoughts he had for this bodies stepmother and stepsister she didn't give a damn thought, to her Tianlong Yun's harem would have hundreds of women as concubines and wives without counting the number of maids and slaves. - croooked3yrCommented
lol,so she was never aroused and never experienced sexual climax when having s.e.x with her husband?
Every time, that she had love with her husband, she was giving her body to him, but her soul was never his. It was always only hers. - croooked3yrCommented
3 different bloodlines?Other than the Dragon and Phoenix ones,the third one is referring to the bloodline of ordinary fatty whose body he has possessed?
At first, he blamed it on the fact that this was the blood essence that she gave him through her kiss. Now he had three different types of bloodlines in his body. - croooked3yrCommented
Its better to use conspired instead of complotted
In this happiness, he could only think about his luck and future. The desire to get revenge towards all those who complotted against him, and destroyed his beautiful life. - croooked3yrCommented
Did you get infected????
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