big plot hole at ch 4. OC invites HP to stay at his muggle family's house, instead of HP spending the summer at Dursleys and ignoring the fact that the blood of the Dursleys had been keeping HP safe all along, and without HP being close to them, then Voldemort and his goons would be having an easy time locating Harry. Of course nothing happens and this is thoroughly ignored, even if this glaring detail is why Harry was at the Dursleys to begin with. To clarify - the actual Reason Harry Potter had been spending ca. 10 years at the Dursleys is stepped on, shredded to pieces and then sent to the nearest dumpster. Though, if you can overlook these pitfalls of plot holes, then I guess you can get some enjoyment out of this read.

Editor very much needed(very~). A quite large portion of sentences in each chapter carry mistakes, some minor and some very much major, and that breaks immersion. For people affluent in English it's not readable. Otherwise, I like the idea behind the story / it's ok