Avatinius
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don't get me wrong... if it's only those listed on the quest list, it should only take 15minutes..
I gave it 5/5 for the numbers sake, but if I truthfully gave it a score, perhaps 4.5/5. this novel / fanfic is an enjoyable read, I do like the main character, the plot is good and what I enjoy a lot is that the author doesn't mind straying away from the manga/novel plots, which I truly enjoy reading about. Tbh, if I wanted to read something that only follows the plot of a novel / manga, then I would have read that manga / novel, not a fanfiction. all in all, kudos to you, Author.
I usually don't comment or review, but this time, I'll do it. honestly speaking, I am enjoying this novel, a lot. kudos to you, author. I do hope that you will continue writing, as it isn't easy to find good novels / fanfics as of late.
I've finally finished reading the raws, I'm not gonna comment on the writing quality either on this website nor on the raws, as raws are usually bad writing quality. I honestly enjoyed the overall feeling of the novel, there are some stuff I'm slightly bitter about but nothing too big or much. Rosen (mc) / Crocodile as a character worked really well into the story, and the story had him as a main focus and didn't set focus on Straw Hats (which I liked that the focus was only on Crocodile). As One Piece isn't finished yet, the author had to make his own twist, which worked pretty well, and the author changed some parts into the story too. all in all, a really enjoyable read.
why read it more than once? if he has as good as memory as he said, he wouldn't need to read or see anything more than once
Child Of Destiny
im giving it 5 star. I'm at chapter 60 or so currently whilst writing this review. so far I'm enjoying the story, it might be a tad confusing at times (the very few chapters, and around where I'm at now), but just continue reading and everything will be explained in a matter of chapters or you'll naturally figure it out by yourself. so my advice is, don't drop out due to being confused at times, as it will only last a chapter or two before everything makes sense again. what I also want to know, will there be romance in this novel? as it kinda does foreshadow a female character that might return, + other fangirls of the MC.
what is this intro?! I need to know his looks, his eye colour, his lung capacity, how long his hair is, how much hair he grows daily, how pale his skin is, how much blood he has in his body, how fast he can blink, how fast he can react, how much muscles he has and so on! so many things that isn't in this intro! he's not a special mc at all!!! btw, this is just a sarcastic comment if you didn't get it :)