Hey, i know im late to the party but would you be so kind to tell me what that deleted comment from the Author was about. And where did you read about Edward sleeping with the girls? Because, if thats true, i will immediately drop this Novel. Many thanks in advance.

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"She's a lot more than what has been shown so far. " I think here lies the core problem with Rebecca. Show don't tell would go a long way in making the character more likeable. You say there is more to her and we don't understand her well yet but how could we, if we only see her annoying traits and nothing of her alluded greatness you keep talking about. I really like this novel and will continue to enjoy it. I just hope you will start to show some positive traits of hers, so we don't have only the negatives to focus on.

Bisher echt nicht schlecht. Nur das zusammenwürfeln von Deutschen, Österreichern und Schweizern ist für mich als Deutscher etwas komisch. Aber erwarte weiterhin gespannt neue Chapter!

Im sorry but i have to drop here. I know you can't let the UNE win all the Time to keep suspense, but this is getting ridiculous. With the technology the UNE is supposed to have, all this is getting too absurd to keep reading about. But this is just my opinion. I wish you good luck and please don't let me deter you from continuing this story.

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