hope you repost it on another platform, and remember 90% of the comments given on any platform are just garbage. though i thank you for the work your putting in writing your stories.

always felt that ofa should go to melisa shield given she is allmights niece and opens up another s tier hero. cause lets face it, with a gamer type system just being able to raise your base stats without end, puts you up to ofa strength within a few years if slow or months if fast

yay a deku that isnt useless for the sports festival ... maybe

loving your story so far , also liking your pacing on increasing his power. as well as not padding word count with constant status updates every chapter like you see in some stories with a system

enjoy your day off 😊

... so far his starting point is .. Ima be the best hermit ever with my Legendary pokemon and shinys ect and then just not do anything with all his start. by the time he gets to town and registers for the league its going to be a walk in the park. esp since he apparently now has another year to lvl his corvsquire to max lvl .... and he hasn't even started his journey ...

thank you for your efforts writing to start, now for the nitty gritty i find my self not caring for any of the oc's besides the mc they are not memorable nore does the interactions at his school or club activities add anything meaningful. yay get a gyru kiss her fall for her in like hours..... look at my secret club room with beer and smokes ...for edge lord cool points... i just dont see much point to it. i end up skimming the chapters like i would skip filler episodes of naruto.

agree with other review, the story is disjointed and confusing. making very little sense, feel like i was reading about a dude in a magic mirror fun house talking to his own reflection and keeps forgetting he already asked it if he knew were to find his pants... it makes almost no sense

...temper himself at 6 years old

remember he is in new york... a shoe box sized space going to run you over a million

doombot to Dumbledore s tower to get the cloak back

hope you feel better soon 💖

thank you for your efforts and for most part its bin a good read. but i dont see the need for the forced hiding of the story writing, it makes no sense. add on to luke the other person commented you cant sign a legal contact at 7 without your parents, plus all the tax documentation she would have to deal with

thanks for your service 🙂

i do not know why anyone bothers to read or comment on comments