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Uhhh Enhancement and Glacicle freezing?? sword qi and using arrows?? You are best at long distance support! You don't even need to mention extraction. I think you are talking nonsense here.
Chocobo
*facepalm* the first thing you should have done is analyse your opponent!
He already has a beard at 18 huh
Hans can drink the water he creates right? His mana shouldn't clash with his aura as they are in the same body.
This paragraph needs some editing. routes > 'roots*' , SPirit > spirit
Dead girl walking~
Sixteen Waifus
What kind of tip?
There's a thing called a sound/voice recorder... Your phone can do it too...
Tricky Savage Shadow Art?
The fifth option is Skeleton Knight. Why does it say Skeleton Rider in the next bit? Is this the typo, or is the Rider the typo?
Ah, my eyes skipped that section when reading for some reason. My bad I will retract.
I was just kidding. Please edit the repeated paragraphs out.
Ah no wonder. We all know about the lusty elf trope.
this chapter needs editing. There are repeating paragraphs! I would like my coins back!