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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Commented

    If anybody checks this and wonders why new chapter isnt out, my keyboard broke so it will be delayed

    Ch 18 Naruto's plotting something again!
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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to Infinite_Spades07

    Snow movie for sure since it plays a part in my eventual canon divergence. I am not too familiar with the other movies, so will probably need to watch em, but maybe the Gelel stones? Not sure about that yet.

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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to NightOwl_Soren

    Aye, originally I wanted to include Zabuza/Haku development, but that'll have to be in a later chapter. I did make a hint at the end from Haku, and it ties into the next two chapters or so. Will make sure that Naruto revisits Wave later on, since the reason I added the arc was because it had some relevance to my canon divergence! Glad ya enjoyed!

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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
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    What did you guys think overall? (This chapter, or the Wave arc in general) I sorta had a vision of something like this happening when I decided to add the Wave arc. Obviously, it's a little different from what I intended, and I don't know if it fully captured what I wanted, but it's probably my favourite chapter so far.

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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to Lektival

    Glad ya liked it. I got them confused with Gozu and Meizu, thinking they were B-ranked threats, and since they specialised in Kenjutsu I thought it would show Naruto's progress. Do you think this version is better? Its a bit more focused on humour, even if the result is the same

    Ch 17 2 Weeks later! The Beginnings of a Plan!
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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Commented

    Once again, sorry for deleting and reuploading the chapter. I definitely wouldn't have received any mercy on what the Naruto vs Waraji and Zori fight was previously.

    Ch 17 2 Weeks later! The Beginnings of a Plan!
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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to NightOwl_Soren

    Yup, it was actually why I decided to use the word ^^

    Everyone baulked at the balls the boy had to fake using a high-level lightning technique to get Zabuza to free Kakashi from his prison. Yet such a strange, gutsy strategy actually paid off.
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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to NightOwl_Soren

    Yup, sorry about that! There was a little problem with one of the scenes in the chapter and I had a big misunderstanding about the samurai (Waraji and Zori) and their strengths. Just fixed the chapter now, so will republish it. Sorry about that

    Ch 16 Easier said than done! Inari and the fox!
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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to whitethief274

    I answered it in another comment, but the name was a play on Naruto often being associated with foxes, and Inari being the name of the God of foxes. Tbh the first half of the chapter (specifically the parts where Naruto was struggling to forgive) should have been included in the previous chapter since it was a continuation of Kakashi's apology. Had quite a few comments on the ending of last chapter (with Naruto just accepting the apology) and comments on this chapter (with Naruto's sudden perspective) and it overall being a bit choppy. So next time this issue hopefully won't occur.

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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to Anonny_Anonymous

    That's understandable, but my goal was for him to come across as struggling to teach Genin-level ninja. ANBU IIRC usually involves Chunin/Jonin level ninja which means they would have a much more solid understanding of techniques and the basics. It would be like a university professor teaching GCSE students, they might know how to do it, but the knowledge and methods wouldn't be the same. Could change it to make it clearer if need be, so more like he is adapting the methods he learnt in ANBU to Genin-level?

    Of course, Kakashi was still a little green to teaching. There were multiple holes in his explanations, and some answers used knowledge too esoteric for them to understand.
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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to Wolfbine

    Thought it would be a fun play on words since 'Inari' is said to be the name of the god of foxes. Since Naruto is often associated with foxes (whether it is because of his whisker marks or being Kurama's Jinchuuriki), thought it might fit. What do ya think? Too cheesy? Can change it if need be

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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to lazyleo

    Glad ya liked it!

    Ch 16 Easier said than done! Inari and the fox!
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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to NightOwl_Soren

    Been using Drawabox.com over the past few days and it's super fun. (At least for me who likes to do tedious things). I'm a big fan of the whole structured approach to learning how to do something.

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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to lyoin

    While I did feel it was somewhat necessary to go into some detail behind Kakashi's changes, It was a pretty tough write tbh! The number of revisions/changes I had to make because I felt Kakashi was too OOC was insane, haha. Sorry if it wasn't your cup of tea, hopefully the next few chapters are better in that regard.

    Ch 15 Kakashi's thoughts! A Revelation!
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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to 1Dreamer_Owl

    It used to be Wed/Sun, but it's been pretty hard to keep up with that ngl! I will try to work out a more reasonable schedule based on how long it would take me to write the hardest chapter. The next chapter should be sometime next week though!

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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to Frances1

    Hope you enjoyed it!

    Ch 15 Kakashi's thoughts! A Revelation!
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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to NightOwl_Soren

    I agree! Wasn't able to reply to your chapter comment, but I was planning something similar. Or well it would be more like forgiveness isn't so easy and both of them know it. Thanks for the comment, and hope you have been enjoying so far!

    Naruto calmed down after hearing Kakashi's explanation as it was what he had expected. The man had just made a mistake. Learning about this, and the fact that Kakashi had given him an apology on his own accord and the attention that the man provided him during missions caused Naruto to cave in and forgive him.
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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to MBBro

    Hey no worries! Probably should have added it in the author's notes but it is pretty hard to convey everything in a single chapter. But basically, this is almost entirely from Kakashi's perspective, next chapter will dive a little into Naruto's thoughts about the matter. Although Naruto said that he forgives Kakashi, saying is easier than doing, so there will be a process to this. Thanks for reading, and hope you enjoyed so far!

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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to JulianGanim

    Hope you enjoyed it!

    Ch 14 Resolving Problems, Hayate-sensei!
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  • Redsnowball
    Redsnowball1yr
    Replied to silverbeardeddwarf

    No problem dude, hope you enjoyed it!

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