Why are you calling it magic not bending

He should get a hold of some asgardian technology

Natasha

Plz no wand

I dont like the mc he is very arrogant and pointlessly aggressive. Makes him seem unintelligent to me. thanks for your hard work

Yeah im dropping

Irish goodbye" refers to a person ducking out of a party, social gathering or very bad date without bidding farewell. ... It attributes the phrase to "the Potato Famine of 1845-1852, when many Irish fled their homeland for America. Never heard of french version

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I have not reviewed a story on this site before but this fanfic deserves to be praised. A great take on percy jackson that details the emotional struggles of the greek gods while incorporating power advancement and epic battles. The character of poseidon is intelligent and takes steps to build allies as well as personal strength. I highly recommend the read.

I did enjoy your story but i am in the military unfortunately and do not have the time to find your story. When i get time to relax i come here for its convienence. Wish you luck and hopefully i will come across your story one day.

I don’t like the cliche princess sneaks along for the adventure without getting caught and then miraculously the adventurE continues instead of returning the princess. but your story has been great besides this. Just wanted to give feedback

The power can be tied to the berserker staff. Maybe when he defeats others the staff will increase in ability by small amounts.

Ended up dropping on ch 13 I think. Story isnt for me

Your oc is very weak compared to the power level of DC villians and having him lose his memories defeats the purpose of a transmigration story. The whole point is to use the knowledge from the previous life to succeed in the current one.

If you have wrItten 100 chapters can i ask why you decided to realease them slowly? Love it so far, thanks for the chap

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Stupid

The system is carrying him so hard. Not a big fan of that

I don’t know how much you have ever worked out but what you are describing is not difficult. I can do those exercises and i am recovering from a shoulder injury rn. The average person that works out would be able to do this. He definitely is not at the limit of what a human can accomplish. If you want a reference for some hard workouts you should look up some US Navy SEAL workouts. They are pretty close to the human limit.

How long will his core be bound. Is he really going to ignore the problem and just hope it fixes itself. Because that would be anoying and weak.