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Animepower1yrCommentedjust take the bruh thing out. It just sounds so weird.
"What are you looking at, bruh?" Aion thought. "You may have a sword and armor, but I bet you can't withstand the smell of the shit of a newborn."- Animepower1yrCommented
why City A? it needs a name at least.
He was the son of the richest man in City A. Was he going to die in such a cowardly way? - Animepower1yrCommented
This feels a bit off to me.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Animepower2yrCommentedCh 4 Shadow Lightning Wolf
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im confuse. thought the sect was only female. shouldn't the elder be female as well?
He shook his head and said in his heart, 'What am I thinking? This kid has a void spirit root, and he cannot even cultivate. So how could it be him? I must have sensed it wrongly.' - Animepower2yrCommented
The last part needs to be deleted or fix it because this is very very very of. I hope i dont see more of this mistakes or at least improve on them.
Ch 33 First Trip off the Mountaindetail10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The StartEastern · Li Baijin - Animepower2yrCommented
destroying in the past???????? Did i miss something?
Jiang Ming said gruffly, "There they are…" Then, he laughed maniacally for a moment before he said, "I'll kill all of you today, Ge Changqing, for destroying my sect in the past."detail10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The StartEastern · Li Baijin - Animepower2yrCommented
it should be 3 not 2 on this one. It seem it can also be 4 because of the opposite of chaos.
There were only two ultimate Sambodhas: Space and Time and Chaos.detail10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The StartEastern · Li Baijin - Animepower2yrCommented
you know what ill change the word. its now "the bloodshed" your welcome everyone.
"This is simply afraid that those Voldemort's plans will be shattered." - Animepower2yrCommented
okay this is just wrong. change to a different name or change this chapter because now its getting wierd and akward.
"This is simply afraid that those Voldemort's plans will be shattered." - Animepower2yrCommented
all i can say goood job lol
"Senior Gandulf!" - Animepower2yrCommented
attack on titan
Eren complained to his killer because he was dying slowly. The least this stupid beast could do was kill him first before making a buffet out of him. - Animepower2yrCommented
what has he being doing over those 20 + years?
If he could not succeed this time, he would have to live his life as a good-for-nothing. - Animepower2yrCommented
......this is bad. i really believe there should be chapter 0. We are missing so much. like saying hey it's been 100 years being here and nothing to back it up is bad.
Lin Bai stopped in his tracks and walked straight to the Awakening Hall. It had been twenty-three years since he had transmigrated to this world. - Animepower2yrCommented
i feel there should be a chapter 0.
As a person who had transmigrated to a different world from the twenty-first century, this world was different from the modern metropolis. This world was obviously biased toward fantasy. The two main professions were martial artists and beastmasters. - Animepower2yrCommented
i believe dude needs to be replaced.
"Yo, isn't it Mike? I thought you wouldn't come here." Suddenly, a dude walks over to Lucas and Mike with few other teenagers. - Animepower2yrCommented
is possible to change the ages? its off. At best he is 17
'Two opposite sex, eight years apart, and such a thing happened. - Animepower2yrCommented
he is 16
'Victor was only 19 years old, and she was already 26 years old.