The story idea is great but the flow of the story is a mess especially when nearing chapter 40 it just jumps to a story without coherance just making it confusing and lots of details is missing and the idea of changing templates instead of combining them and have an OP MCis just mess up whats the point of having 2 of them and cant use the skills from the other template.

The story was good at the start but when thw upgrade of drone to have AI resulted in tranaforming the drone to iron man. It got stupid not only that various mc and dc characters emerge from transforming luxury cars that wasnt even there to begin with there not even machines anymore. Its not even worth it anymore this author also made some novels that has great idea but poor story

The story is too rushed making the story too clutered and annoying to read......................................................................................

Whats with the artefact is it on purpose

Just too much inferiority complex oozing out. Just sad reading this cause all of the nationalistic propaganda destroys the fun in reading it

I just cant understand why he cant recruit hot shots as they say in the novel? Due to them can surpass him isnt it impossible because everytime they advanced the master advances as well and get gift bags.

Thats grim....not a great start

Yeah this is getting ridiculous this novel throws out the basic common sense. A 8 year old kid can be held legally liable for a mortgage? Then there is child labour law but system mission is open a restaurant. How? At least the author made the MC legal age for it to make sense

One more example of the chinese author not giving any basic common sense in making the novel

Yeah lately chinese novels throws out basic common sense when making a novel

What about the info about souls and dying that he gonna post online

All of that in a day

Looks like fk the stats and level up bonuses

Theres no lvl up notice. Its impossible that he's still lvl 1

Where is the disvovery points and additional drops he mentioned

Its stupid to say its hard to cultivate that octance blast cause he cultivated 3 meridians in 20 days worth of training. So i dont know the treshold of hard but i think the treshold or hard for the author is 1 or 2 days of not accomplishing anything but in a novel of martial arts that can be considered as easy

Theres a loophole in the system you can tranfer a days worth of cultivation and can get 2x to 10k times in return. Then he can just reinvest the return he got in a continued cycle and get more without the need to cultivate anymore

He doesnt get any skill from other survivor?

A various of messy plots where even the first character to provoke the MC forgets the MC achievement every chapter that he was a part in. Its just annoying. Why did the novel author allowed these.

Yeah but its different from the novel not in the good way but in a bad way