The story idea is great but the flow of the story is a mess especially when nearing chapter 40 it just jumps to a story without coherance just making it confusing and lots of details is missing and the idea of changing templates instead of combining them and have an OP MCis just mess up whats the point of having 2 of them and cant use the skills from the other template.
The story was good at the start but when thw upgrade of drone to have AI resulted in tranaforming the drone to iron man. It got stupid not only that various mc and dc characters emerge from transforming luxury cars that wasnt even there to begin with there not even machines anymore. Its not even worth it anymore this author also made some novels that has great idea but poor story
The story is too rushed making the story too clutered and annoying to read......................................................................................
Just too much inferiority complex oozing out. Just sad reading this cause all of the nationalistic propaganda destroys the fun in reading it
Yeah this is getting ridiculous this novel throws out the basic common sense. A 8 year old kid can be held legally liable for a mortgage? Then there is child labour law but system mission is open a restaurant. How? At least the author made the MC legal age for it to make sense
Its stupid to say its hard to cultivate that octance blast cause he cultivated 3 meridians in 20 days worth of training. So i dont know the treshold of hard but i think the treshold or hard for the author is 1 or 2 days of not accomplishing anything but in a novel of martial arts that can be considered as easy
A various of messy plots where even the first character to provoke the MC forgets the MC achievement every chapter that he was a part in. Its just annoying. Why did the novel author allowed these.