ViniRedShadow
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As the disclaimer says in the first chapter, this guy owns nothing, not even the fanfic. This clown stole it from AdrianKing on fanfiction,net.If you want to read it, go there, it's already complete and free.
my family is powerful **Harry**
Nah, it's fine Eve. If I could give a suggestion tho. I think you should take a little break, maybe a week or just some days, so that you could actually fix your sleep schedule. It's not healthy to sleep so little or so irregularly (speaking from experience). It could lead to lack of focus and decrease in productivity. So if you could fix it, you could write better (not that it's bad, it's great, mind you.), and maybe take more time for yourself, aside from the various health benefits. If you think that taking this time maybe will hinder your writing groove, you could still write something in the meantime without the pressure to upload, and maybe even create some extra chapters for some future inconvenience. Anyway just want you to saty healthy man, and to not put too much pressure in yourself. Thanks for the chapter.
yeah, this chapter feels a a little bit off to me. From Quinn attacking first (could be explained by Quinn being on edge by being in the forest, but is a bit out of character, especially because the wolves talk first), to then he the wolves just stopping and answering his questions, it doesn't make too much sense to me.
Yeah, you are right, I was confused because there was this sentence "But the Rosenborg players didn't take their foot of the gas right after the third goal." That's why I though that the two last goals were the 4th and 5th ones.
shouldn't it be 5?