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Machiavellius3mthCommentedCh 403 Nine Dollars and Ninety Cents- Machiavellius1yrPosted
This is an otherwise interesting novel absolutely ruined by the translation/editor. It's like they had two manuscripts and had to combine them and every now and again it will repeat itself as it it never happened the first time. Frankly it's horribly unprofessional and just another feather in webnovel's "stupid dumb s*it we do". At least the character retains there original names instead of being renamed "victor" or some s*it.
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If he didn't want to lose his freedom, he couldn't reveal his true talent after being in seclusion by the side of the strongest expert for more than a hundred years. This was because once his SSS-rank beast tamer talent was revealed, the powerhouses of other races and beast overlords would come and assassinate him! - Machiavellius1yrCommented
Really? Really??? Any suspension of disbelief I may have had ended right here. 1 man, terribly sick climbed up a ridge jumped down with a net and captured 13 huge ravens? I don't think so. They couldn't physically fly that close to each other... if he had gotten 2 or 3 that would have made sense. If this is the level of thought put into this novel my reading ends here.
"Damn it!" Wang Yuan quickly ordered the crows to scatter but was still a bit too slow. A man had already jumped down from the waterfall with a net in his hand, the man's face was covered in black spots, blood was flowing from both his mouth and nose, it was Brad who was kicked out from the party earlier. - Machiavellius1yrCommentedCh 1 System Initialization