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Cala_Storylord2yrCommentedGuessing the author is either sick, in a slump, or faced with a sudden tragedy and needs to take time to themselves. Whatever the case may be, I hope things get better for them and I'll be waiting for whenever they decide to continue, if they decide to continue.
Ch 630 Chapter 630- Cala_Storylord2yrCommentedGunner simply placed a Bronze Ando Coin in his finger and flicked it towards the Sharpshooter. Seeing its speed, Clive could understand that he would be hit, as his body was not fast enough to maneuver around it.
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"a paragraph comment here ;)" I've left it, now what?
[A/N] If you want more chapters, leave a paragraph comment here ;) - Cala_Storylord2yrCommented
Clop? It was only a matter of time for this reference to arrive. Especially since the Nightmare arrived and those panthers from a couple floors ago.
— Clip! Clop! Clip! Clop! — - Cala_Storylord2yrCommentedCh 1750 God Talk (Part 2)
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Yep. Well... It's SAO season 2, not SAO Alternative: GGO. Though the game is GGO.
In fact, stunts like that mostly worked in games. One should never underestimate the power of desperate enemies. One could very well decide to give a free hug while clutching a grenade (or the equivalent). - Cala_Storylord2yrCommented
These journeymen work by the hour. They're hourneymen.
Darius entered the first rest station and passed through to the first battle room of the Hourneyman floors. Here, 1,000 level 21 monsters were released at him from all sides. - Cala_Storylord2yrReplied to Ferrero
Ayyy bugs are a frequent meal item in some cultures (grasshoppers, etc).
Following that, the very ground beneath them would become unstable as if some giant entity was moving underground and needles of earth would emerge and turn them into shish kebab. - Cala_Storylord2yrCommented
i want to picture the scene, but the only thing that comes to mind is the massive amount of stuttering and low frames from trying to render the various spell effects.
So one could easily picture the scene of the battle. A magnificent array of magic was used and abused, the same spells used continually and on repeat like a music playlist. - Cala_Storylord2yrCommented
It's all about that Flow state.
The monsters going forward should be tougher and more tricky, so he didn't believe that he would not be able to enter the zone once more. As such, he walked into the third battle room and faced off against a horde of 80 level 11 monsters. - Cala_Storylord2yrCommented
He's getting closer to Susanoo levels.
Description: This manual was created through pure Transmutation. It is a spell designed to generate a variable number of airborne ice lances of incredible sharpness to rain down on a large area of foes, and is perfect. There is a 100% chance to learn the spell within and its power is increased by 500%.] - Cala_Storylord2yrCommented
It's not a pile bunker but it'll do.
Meanwhile, Darius channeled his downwards momentum towards his currently outstretched spear. The tip was aligned with his falling body, making his form appear connected to his weapon. - Cala_Storylord2yrCommentedIn fact, stunts like that mostly worked in games. One should never underestimate the power of desperate enemies. One could very well decide to give a free hug while clutching a grenade (or the equivalent).
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Is this the third coming of Elijah?
"Now, no guards are present. Our escape will be very easy. Lord Kyros, I have prepared the way!" - Cala_Storylord2yrCommented
I feel like there's a chapter missing. The comments about a god or fallen fighting nearby as well as their attempts to cut the wing, and when did aron get burned? Generally you tend to have a chapter, or even a brief interlude explaining events like this, and not seeing one here just referencing events that happened, but weren't shown to the reader, is quite jarring.
Ch 166 Dragon Slayer - Cala_Storylord2yrCommented
Airom's past?
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It cost her an arm. Or it caused her to lose an arm?
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In reference to your author's note: Codes are Paths though, if your earlier description was accurate (from a couple of chapters ago). Or at least whatever is past a Path is a code (since you have some similar naming sense between novels). This novel feels more like 'Law of Duality: Explained', with constant references to different types of duality as an analogy. I like it, so def continue as is. I like being made aware of the high level stuff early, even if not fully explaining everything, but giving the reader enough to make connections for when the really abstract stuff gets mentioned later on. I really like your descriptions for these high concept depictions of foundational building blocks of the universe.
Ch 155 Before you Were Born, I Am!