shadowfox9801
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shadowfox98011dCommentedaway > many?*
"I know who you are. You have made a name for yourself, just like I have as well. Having grown through away techniques, I earned my position in the Crimson Crane and helped them grow, and that was before I had this shield!" Tilion shouted back.- shadowfox98011dCommented
body > shield*
One of the heads came charging at the side, but Ice lifted his body and blocked the attack; he was pushed back only a few meters before he continued to charge in. As another head came towards him, he then swung his giant club down, hitting it on top of its head. - shadowfox98012dReplied to Oakley_Tallent
when JKS told us this takes place roughly 1,000 years after MDS and roughly 1,000 years before MVS.
This man was Theodore Tallsworth. With a name like that, one would have expected him to grow tall, and this was his height before he had even become an Altered. This man was special for a number of reasons, not just because he was practically second in charge of the White Rose division, but because he was one of the first Altered to ever exist. - shadowfox98013dReplied to Oakley_Tallent
roughly 1,000 years
This man was Theodore Tallsworth. With a name like that, one would have expected him to grow tall, and this was his height before he had even become an Altered. This man was special for a number of reasons, not just because he was practically second in charge of the White Rose division, but because he was one of the first Altered to ever exist. - shadowfox98014dCommented
stumbled > stumped *
“What are you… how?” Gary was a bit stumbled and was thinking back to the powers he had seen him use so far. There hadn’t been a single transformation from him. His body features hadn’t changed, but when he sensed his power, there was a strong urge in him. - shadowfox98015dCommented
brisket > Bristle*
“You know that thing with diamonds, do you know how much force you need?” Numba replied as he grabbed the sharp brisket from Ian and lifted it in the air. He then swung it down even faster and harder, hitting it on the exact point, cutting off one end and making a smooth circular bottom. “You need a lot of force.” - shadowfox98015dCommented
watched > wacked*
As Tyler had gone in, so did Kevin, in hopes that they could do something. As the four remaining werewolves had hopped in, attacking Greed, he had stayed in his position. He watched one of the werewolves with his tail hitting them far back and into one of the buildings at the side. - shadowfox98016dCommented
into his werewolf form*
As he sprinted full force on all fours, he leapt up and started to transform into his wolf form, gathering his fist he punched hard right in the stomach. He pushed deep with his fist and twisted it more and more. - shadowfox98016dCommented
Glutton > Greed*
Kai had been fighting for a long time now. He had been fighting the day before, and now, ever since Glutton had shown up, he had been facing him head-on. Then, he had been going up against two of the main members from the Phoenix Gang. - shadowfox98016dCommented
Kia > Kai*
“I’ll be honest with you… I’m out of ideas,” Olivia said. “I guess all we can do now is wait for that help that Kia spoke about.” Olivia commented. “I just want to say that you did well, young one; this wasn’t your fault, it’s just we’re going up against a rather big ugly bastard.” - shadowfox98016dCommented
practical > partial *
The rest of her body had remained intact; this was a practical transformation of her Altered form, rather than a full one, but something she felt like she needed to win the fight. - shadowfox98016dCommented
Izzy*
Izzt was the one most at a loss, since her powers worked similar to the Hydra’s in a way. Her Altered form focused on strengthening part of her hairs to wrap around, pull, drag, and hit its target, but the Hydra’s head was far stronger than all of her power together. - shadowfox98018dCommented
Alterians*
"You looked troubled, so for a moment, I wanted to snap you out of it," Marcus answered. "Besides, I didn't realize they made you Algersians so weak. I know you don't rely on physical strength, but it wouldn't do you any harm to put some muscle on your body at some point. Anyway, what have you got on your mind? Is it that mage?" - shadowfox98019dCommented
hybris > hybrid
Yet strangely, it felt like there wasn't a hint of fear. In this situation, with a Hybris, with the Light Faction clan elders, and something now going on with the Demonic Faction area, why wasn't this person scared? What was he thinking in his mind? She was almost entranced by this person's actions, or lack of actions, and that's why when he finally made a move, she made sure to see every detail. - shadowfox98019dCommented
truely mean what you say*
"Plans don't always go to plan; this might have been something unexpected for you, and now you just need to improvise. If you truly say what you say, then you must stay in the Light Faction until this matter is sorted," Kawak ordered. - shadowfox98019dCommented
broken paragraph
could see that the sword had failed to pierce Mantis, instead, it had only pierced the ground. Cracking the foundation deeper underneath. - shadowfox98019dCommented
"from" is redundant
"You, aren't you from the Amir the vice principal of the Dark Faction Academy, what are you doing, what is the meaning of this!" Ricar asked. - shadowfox98019dCommented
openents >opponents
"Don't rule out the others yet; you never know. Maybe the Demon was just lucky with the level of openents he has gotten so far. He could just be lucky with this whole thing." - shadowfox980111dCommented
break > bread
In the Light Faction world, what happened to those that were unable to do anything but were forced to steal break to feed their starving family. Because they didn't follow the rules, and simply fought for their survival would they be executed as well.